Winter


snow blankets the ground
stormy winds, naked trees sway 
winter’s breath, ice-cold 


By Zyrool

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/5/2025 3:10:00 PM

Very descriptive lines penned. Thanks for sharing your creative Haiku. Sara K

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 1/5/2025 4:13:00 PM

Thank you for the read, Sara, means a lot. Wishing you a fabulous new week ahead, my friend.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 12/30/2024 10:40:00 AM

Beautiful, Zyrool. Winter does have a unique and special beauty about it even through the storms, the barrenness, ice and cold. You have captured that personality wonderfully! Sending you blessings for health, happiness and prosperity in the new year my friend!

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 12/30/2024 11:07:00 AM

Thank you for your lovely words Sam, much appreciated. Have a beautiful rest of your day and a wonderful new week ahead. May the coming year bring you the best of everything you need, my friend.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 12/29/2024 5:42:00 PM

I liked reading your haiku. The personification adds a lot to it.

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 12/29/2024 9:50:00 PM

Thank you for your lovely words and the read, Hilda. Wishing you a wonderful new week ahead and Happy New Year, my friend.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 12/28/2024 2:48:00 PM

it is cold here in TO for sure dear poet, stay warm

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 12/29/2024 5:44:00 AM

Thank you for the read, Rose. Your winters are truly very cold. I experienced it once, swore never again. Wishing you a peaceful Sunday and a Prosperous New Year, my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 12/28/2024 10:40:00 AM

Hello Zyrool, that sounds like a stormy winter. . Happy New Year. Hugs. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/29/2024 11:01:00 AM

Hello Zhyrool, Thank you. Thank you. We put away the Christmas decorations today. I will talk to you on soup m ail later today./ I hope you had a great Christmas. Hugs. /Darleene/

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 12/29/2024 5:52:00 AM

Hello Darlene, yes it sure does. Wishing you a peaceful Sunday and a wonderful New Year my dearest friend. Stay blessed.

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 12/29/2024 5:47:00 AM

Hello Darlene, yes it sure does. Wishing you a peaceful Sunday and a wonderful New Year my dearest friend. Stay blessed.

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/28/2024 10:35:00 AM

Dear Zyrool, excellent imagery captures the winter scene with poetic finesse. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 12/29/2024 5:51:00 AM

Hello Susan, thank you for dropping by and for leaving such beautiful words behind. Much appreciated. Sending Blessings your way and wishing you a great day and a fabulous New Year.

Ilene Bauer

Date: 12/23/2024 8:34:00 AM

You’ve really captured winter in just a few words, Zyrool! Lovely!

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 12/23/2024 9:23:00 AM

Hello Ilene, thank you for your beautiful words, greatly appreciated. Wishing you a fabulous new week ahead and Happy Christmas, my friend.

Tom Woody

Date: 12/23/2024 5:41:00 AM

I'm in sunny Florida this winter so I won't see the snow. Can't say I'll miss it. Nice haiku Zy

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 12/23/2024 9:21:00 AM

Hello Tom, thank you for the read and your nice words. Oh, I do envy you being in the warmer climate. Send me some here as it’s very cold here. Have a great new week ahead and a wonderful time over the Christmas holidays, my friend.

Winter

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