Winter

a cold rain freezes ice crystals cling to pine bows ….bells in the distance

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Date: 12/29/2023 4:41:00 AM

Way to go with this winter winner in Tania's contest. Congratulations to you. Thank you for sharing it with us. Sara K

Date: 12/25/2023 11:54:00 AM

This one should be higher places. Anyway a merry Christmas to you

Date: 12/24/2023 12:53:00 PM

John, congratulations on your winning placement with your wonderful haiku!

Date: 12/24/2023 8:18:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Your "Winter" is a wonderful write/story in just 3 lines. Love It... Merry Christmas...........

Date: 12/12/2023 2:21:00 AM

A timely haiku for this cold winter we are having. Thanks for the scene.

Date: 12/11/2023 6:25:00 PM

Too cold for me, so I'm headed back inside. A great haiku, my friend.

Date: 12/11/2023 10:28:00 AM

“ice crystals cling to pine bows” love that line the most, beautiful haiku. Snowy too. Best wishes for the contest

John Lawless
Date: 12/11/2023 4:07:00 PM

thanks Ink, Christmas in New England tends to bring out such beauty...

Date: 12/11/2023 7:02:00 AM

vivid in its imagery... feels so cold.

John Lawless
Date: 12/11/2023 4:08:00 PM

and beautiful in its icy shimmering, thanks for stopping by SO