Winter

Winter has crept in like a beautiful bride!
Awesome in beauty! Yet, in shame, she does hide! 
Her bridal gown is snow-white, graceful, and pure!
Yet, how long will she wear it - she's not so sure!
When hailstones and chill winds leave her heart shattered,
Won't her charm, like flowers in storms, get tattered...?

06 November 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Ray Choudhury Avatar
November 9, 2021 at 5:49 AM
Dear Christuraj, you have painted a lovely bride in white! Winter is beautiful, can be harsh sometimes! Your poetic mind may find serene beauty in snow. Warm wishes ~ Mala
Kendrick Avatar
November 7, 2021 at 3:57 AM
I could say it is awesome that we don't have all of the above so far this colder season. I like your use of personification in this nice short work. I enjoyed reading it. Sara
Alex Avatar
November 7, 2021 at 4:25 AM
Thank you very much.
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