Winter

Winter



Winter's here
Oh what a sight
Look around
Its all white

It glitters n shines
N hides the hilltops
Fills the streets
And never stops

Falls without
A fright or fear
Wherever it likes 
It makes its chair

Covering trees
N buildings n all
Like an ice-cream crust
When the snowflakes fall

What fun we have
In the snow so soft
When cold we rush
To the outside loft

Warm we are
Beginning to feel
Spring breezes now
Becoming real

A couple days
N spring's to come
Our soft white days
Will soon be done
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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H. Avatar
January 24, 2009 at 9:37 AM
Congrats on getting featured this week! love the poem! ~Jen~
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January 23, 2009 at 4:52 PM
Congratulations on your lovely write being featured this week..Beautiful flow and very peaceful tone..God Bless*Tyesha
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January 22, 2009 at 12:57 PM
Congratulations Maryam, on your poem "Winter" being featured this week on Poetry Soup. Vince
Jordan Avatar
January 22, 2009 at 9:33 AM
Maryam - I just wanted to say congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
Richards Avatar
January 19, 2009 at 4:59 PM
This beautiful winter poem is so full of hope for springtime...lovely writing! congratulations on this being featured this week!! ~Carrie
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January 19, 2009 at 12:53 PM
Congratuations on this lovely piece being featured this week, Maryam! Love, Robin
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January 19, 2009 at 10:20 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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January 19, 2009 at 9:55 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar
Austin Avatar
January 19, 2009 at 7:42 AM
Last stanza...don't we hope up here in Michgan. Congrats on this selection...enjoyed. Love, daver
L Avatar
December 21, 2008 at 6:19 AM
i am beginning to love your poems i can read them all day
Montgomery Avatar
December 10, 2008 at 9:12 AM
This one is good!!
Gass Avatar
November 22, 2008 at 6:06 PM
This paints a pretty picture. It made me feel like playing in the snow. Thank you for your comment. I'm glad you liked it. I hope to see more of your work. Love, Robin
Ahmad Avatar
November 21, 2008 at 3:57 AM
hey maryam, amazing poem :) hey u know what? Even MY sister's name is Maryam :)
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