Winsome Rebel


Winsome student enrolled with a rap sheet name,
school authorities rue the day you first came

Such a young fearless rebel,
mischief and mayhem always seem to follow
Wonder who made the bathroom toilets explode

Plead your rebellious cause,
explain the flooded basement hall
The cost of educating you ain't small,
but it do give the principal pause

Your substitute teacher is scared,
her students said she was hiding under a chair
She believes you are the reason she's losing her hair
School counselor thinks you're emotionally impaired,
and the faculty want their grievances against you aired

Winsome rebel, how is it you became who you are?
What force forged, then dropped you from a malevolent shooting star?
Angry non-conformist child who was born in the back of a tavern bar
Was with your parents when they were killed by a speeding oncoming car
Got a mad heart that carries such a deep soul searing scar
Gonna burn a blazing path, because a charming rebel can always go far

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 4/5/2017 5:58:00 PM
I knew a guy like this in school. He got into with a strong football player type and had his tooth knocked out of his mouth onto the grass before us all. I don't know what ever happened to him, but I will bet he came from an extremely dysfunctional family with a lot of anger issues. Karma plays a big part in our lives. Sadly. Well written soul searching piece Freddie. 7
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Date: 4/5/2017 3:59:00 PM
I loved the format of this poem and the rhymes are spot on my friend. Sounds like this rebel definitely had a cause. Very, very cool Freddie. Ah, the captcha or validation code for this comment is MVP...Most Valuable Poet. :)
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