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Winning the War

WINNING THE WAR
In tough action of war crawls the soldier across the thorny ground riddled with mine, charges with loaded gun on the shoulder, revenge and rage in mind sorely combine. Facing risk of dying any instant flash of the face of his little daughter he sees smile in his emotion dormant, he stows for his mission is to slaughter. His task is to kill enemy at sight with hands that fondly caressed the daughter. Fear of death is killed by the spur to fight, to live for her, it’s not time to falter. Become a bold soldier, fight without fear you’ll live for the loved ones winning the war.
January 8, 2019. Syllable count : 10 each line Checked on howmanysyllables.com

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Date: 1/8/2019 11:21:00 AM
Your poem searches the heart of the soldier who is compelled to kill for the sake of his beloved. Your sonnet is so poignantly beautiful Subimal. I hope to see this as a top winner! A Fave my friend! : ) xxoo
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