Winning

He was so excited, he just couldn't wait
He'd often check the calendar and reconfirm the date
He was a child of struggles, challenged some would say
Mental disabilities his progress would delay
 
But he was not to be denied, he knew not of defeat 
Because of Special Olympics he was able to compete
When the special day arrived, devoid of any fears
He happily joined the others, a collection of his peers
 
I heard the starter call their names and prepare them for their race
He gave a wave and smiled at me, joy written on his face
At last when the gun sounded and left them to their fate
The runners all surged forward with their ungainly gait
 
As they approached the first curve, he was giving it his all
When suddenly without warning I saw him trip and fall
My heart I think stopped beating as I saw him start to rise
And I couldn't stop the tears from welling in my eyes

But then a strange thing happened, two others in the meet
Came back and stopped beside him and helped him to his feet
Together they began to run, well behind the rest
But it didn't seem to matter, toward the finish line they pressed

And holding hands they finished well behind the winners pace
They didn't care that they were last, but that they'd run the race
Since then I often ask myself as new challenges I face
How do I define winning.  How will I run my race
 
1st place in"A Fragment Of Life" contest  
Written Jun 22,2011
Bob Quigley
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Merryman Avatar
March 7, 2012 at 9:31 PM
A heart-warming story, Bob. Congrats on your HM in PD's contest! Love, Kim
Quigley Avatar
March 8, 2012 at 8:09 AM
Thanks Kim
Brown Avatar
March 7, 2012 at 6:30 AM
A belated congratulations on your win in P.D.'s contest Bob. Love, Carol
Quigley Avatar
March 8, 2012 at 8:09 AM
Thank you Carol
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
March 5, 2012 at 8:39 PM
Congrats on your win with this fine write! I enjoyed the story and the message behind it. Blessings, Rhonda
Quigley Avatar
March 8, 2012 at 8:10 AM
Appreciate that Rhonda
Sweetheart Avatar
March 5, 2012 at 8:23 PM
congrats Bob on an HM for top notch poetry entry luv.. spectacular lines.. always..
Quigley Avatar
March 8, 2012 at 8:10 AM
Thank you Linda Marie
Taylor Avatar
March 5, 2012 at 9:54 AM
Congrats, Bob. Awesome write. Great job, my friend. Nice going. Ralph
Quigley Avatar
March 8, 2012 at 8:11 AM
Much appreciated Ralph
Prabhu Avatar
March 5, 2012 at 7:32 AM
you touched my heart deeply with the rhyme... congrats on HM......sashi
Quigley Avatar
March 8, 2012 at 8:11 AM
Thank you Sashi
A   Avatar
March 4, 2012 at 7:02 PM
Bob, .congratulations! in my contest...muched enjoyed your entry,;-) always*PD
Quigley Avatar
March 8, 2012 at 8:12 AM
Thank you for recognizing my poem PD
A   Avatar
December 19, 2011 at 11:40 PM
Bob, a late~ congratulations on your wonderful win. In my "you pick a poem contest" ;-) Thank you for the support,.hope you are enjoying your holidays~.p.d.
Brown Avatar
December 19, 2011 at 5:40 AM
Congratulations on your super win in P.D.'s "It's Up To You" contest Bob. Love, Carol
Quigley Avatar
December 19, 2011 at 8:37 AM
Thank you Carol
Poet Avatar
December 18, 2011 at 3:48 AM
An excellent poem Bob.I would have placed it higher.Congratulations!
Quigley Avatar
December 18, 2011 at 7:58 AM
Thanks Kash. Kind of you to say
Dietrich Avatar
December 18, 2011 at 12:14 AM
Hey, here I am again congratulating this poem for another win four months later. Congratulations!
Quigley Avatar
December 18, 2011 at 7:58 AM
Thanks Andrea
Dietrich Avatar
August 28, 2011 at 1:01 AM
wonderfully inspirational, and congrats on your top win!
Ramage Avatar
August 27, 2011 at 6:39 PM
Just WONDERFUL! what a great poem and how true, that is the important aspect, how you run the race. Well done and congratulations on your win. Lee
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August 27, 2011 at 12:20 PM
Bob, wonderful story and poetry. Congrats on your first place win. We could all learn a lesson or two from this write. We should all strive to finish this race of Life, in this world. Love and Bless you, Glenna
Quigley Avatar
August 27, 2011 at 1:37 PM
Yes we could. Winning is but a matter of perspective, Thank you for your comments Glenna
Lepapa Avatar
August 27, 2011 at 10:07 AM
You deserved to win as this fragment of life is an inspiration and heart conquering to everyone who can read
Quigley Avatar
August 27, 2011 at 10:32 AM
Very kind words indeed. Thanks for reading me
Villanueva Avatar
August 27, 2011 at 4:27 AM
what a win with this well-narrated poem~~~a big CONGRATULATIONS for you~~~smile~~~*-*junjun
Quigley Avatar
August 27, 2011 at 10:32 AM
Thanks junjun. Much appreciated
Mannan Avatar
August 26, 2011 at 11:17 PM
This is such a fine writing. Many warm congrats for this win.
Quigley Avatar
August 27, 2011 at 10:33 AM
Thank you very much Tahera
La France Avatar
August 26, 2011 at 5:02 PM
Congratulations on first place in my contest with this incredible poem~~
Quigley Avatar
August 27, 2011 at 10:34 AM
Thank you for receiving it so warmly.
Guzzi Avatar
August 26, 2011 at 4:51 PM
so true! what a good moral lesson! Congrad's on your win! light & love
Quigley Avatar
August 27, 2011 at 10:35 AM
Thank you very much Debbie
Minardi Avatar
August 26, 2011 at 11:20 AM
Wonderful and very thoughtful entry. Congrats on your win.
Quigley Avatar
August 26, 2011 at 12:21 PM
Appreciate your comments Dinda
Mantle Avatar
August 26, 2011 at 4:10 AM
A beautiful entry that brought tears to my eyes! and well deserving of your fine win. I think you sum this up well with your last line. Best wishes Em:)
Quigley Avatar
August 26, 2011 at 12:21 PM
Very kind words indeed. Thank you.
Fassbender Avatar
August 25, 2011 at 5:59 PM
This is beautiful; tears in my eyes as well. Great 1st place win.
Quigley Avatar
August 26, 2011 at 12:23 PM
I guess I should have included a box of kleenex with the entry. Thanks for the kudos
Horne Avatar
August 25, 2011 at 4:50 PM
Many congrats to you, Bob : )
Quigley Avatar
August 26, 2011 at 12:23 PM
Thanks Jack
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August 25, 2011 at 4:21 PM
Bob-Absolutely beautiful-A big. congrats. to you :)
Quigley Avatar
August 26, 2011 at 12:25 PM
Thanks Natalie. Appreciate it.
Brown Avatar
August 25, 2011 at 2:11 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Constance's "A Fragment of Life" contest Bob. Love, Carol
Quigley Avatar
August 25, 2011 at 3:23 PM
As always, thank you Carol
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