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Winners and Losers

cocoon of the past cracks,  fresh sight of light  new paths appear

Silent One
22 December 2018
Example for Winners and Losers contest.

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Sunita U.D Palawon

February 16, 2019 at 10:46 AM

Hope and inspiration..as a page is turned. Awesome. :) Sunita

David William Breidenthal

January 27, 2019 at 12:54 AM

What a spectacular poem! -JWE

Joanna Daniel

January 1, 2019 at 7:09 AM

Great monoku, SO:)

Janice Canerdy

December 30, 2018 at 8:06 PM

A GOOD one, S.O.! Janice

Tahira Parveen

December 27, 2018 at 5:41 PM

Never ending, roads to adhere in. Beautiful Silent one :)

Susan Ashley

December 27, 2018 at 9:21 AM

I love the deep and inspiring beauty of your exceptional monoku, Silent One. Vibrant artistic expression! Warmest wishes always my wonderful friend.. ~Susan

Moon Flower

December 26, 2018 at 10:04 PM

Simply beautiful, as always. Happy Holidays.

Paul Callus

December 26, 2018 at 9:12 AM

Escaping from the past, with a promise of better things to come... Best regards // paul

Mystic Rose Rose

December 25, 2018 at 7:03 AM

Thank God for new paths, Merry Christmas dear S. O.

Eve Roper

December 24, 2018 at 9:38 PM

wonderful

Charlie Smith

December 24, 2018 at 4:21 PM

Merry Christmas Silent One, peace be with you...

Mike Gentile

December 24, 2018 at 11:59 AM

Excellent Silent One!!! Happy Holidays to you and yours !!!

Winged Warrior

December 24, 2018 at 11:05 AM

Excellent example for your contest my Silent Friend...have a wonderful holiday season...love & light...^WW^

Vladislav Raven

December 23, 2018 at 1:15 PM

Hi Silent, such a beautiful Monoku. An excellent write my friend. Your pen runs gold. A most creative and deep write my friend. Have a wonderful Sunday. Your friend always....Mike.

Constance La France

December 23, 2018 at 9:46 AM

Silent, beauty in a few words, well done and love the image too ~

Andrea Dietrich

December 23, 2018 at 9:13 AM

It's cool that this also could work for hello and goodbye!!

Besma Riabi Dziri

December 23, 2018 at 6:33 AM

A revealing promise of Hope, Life and Triumph! Always a winner despite any losses.. a wonderful deep Monoku Silent One! Enjoyed the read.. My deepest regards. Be blessed always.

Lawrence Sharp

December 23, 2018 at 2:51 AM

Very poetic and comforting words, even in their brevity. A very fine write.

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

December 23, 2018 at 12:50 AM

Woah have I ever read such a creative monoku before? Why this is so deep and great in brevity I'm obviously awed and floored by its brilliance. I'm still in my possessive hubby's seemingly unbreakable cocoon so I could relate to that a bit. Kudos but I want to read more for this is too short a piece to be satisfy my poetic heart of yer brilliance poet.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

December 22, 2018 at 10:56 PM

Ooh that's lovely. x

Brandy Nicole

December 22, 2018 at 10:41 PM

Sounds like a new beginning to me. Spread your wings and always touch the sky. This is beautiful. ~ Brandy

Darlene De Beaulieu

December 22, 2018 at 5:55 PM

Hello Silent One , Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year. I like this poem.These words says it all. Have a nice evening my friend.

Aqua Marine

December 22, 2018 at 5:46 PM

Perfect timing for myself to read this inspiring write! We need to "lose the past" to create a more successful future! Change is essential for survival And growth.Thank you! Hope you have a great time with family and friends, SO! : ))