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There's cheese in my chair! Shore hope I don't catch cholera... sheet! My child will succumb to the bully If I can't cook his egg yolks green. Forgive my panic, but this is a BIG deal! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Written by Nancy Jones on the eve of the 13th of August For Sydney's contest

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Carrie Richards

Date: 8/15/2011 4:44:00 PM

Okay, now you have captured my interest!! Funny....I must go check out Sydney's contest!! (oh ps....I have revised my entry for your Ode contest, after reviewing the Ode format....my earlier version was much too narrative, I think. Hope this works better...and hope it wasn't too late to edit. :) Thanks

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 8/15/2011 12:51:00 PM

ok I don't know what is happening in this poem....sounds funny though.

Mohammad Yamin

Date: 8/14/2011 9:07:00 PM

This awesome poem is surely a winner. Wish you good luck. Thanks also for your enlightened comments on my poem The Escape. -Mohammad

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/13/2011 9:34:00 PM

well good luck in the contest Nancy but where is it.. did Sydney judge the last contest yet? luv the lines used to express with wit..luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/13/2011 8:34:00 PM

And this should be a big winner Nancy. I love it going to my favorites today. Love, Carol Hoping I get to come back and congratulate you on this being a winner.