Winner

she took it all
and now she sits  home alone
in her hair sweater
pulling threads.

depressionfree verse

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Vince Suzadail Jr.

April 21, 2009 at 9:57 AM

Congrats Veronica on "Winner" being featured. Vince

Abe Lopez

April 20, 2009 at 8:45 PM

Congrats on having your poem featured!

Sharon Winter

April 20, 2009 at 3:42 PM

Congrats on an excellent featured write of the week! Love, Shar

Carrie Richards

April 20, 2009 at 12:31 PM

Wow...this is a powerful poem in few words. Congratulations...so worthy of being featured this week. ~ Carrie

April 20, 2009 at 12:17 PM

Much said in just four lines. Interest poem to reflect on. Congratulations on having it featured. Enjoy your honor. Wishing you ongoing success. Karen

Sue Mason

April 20, 2009 at 9:03 AM

Poignant write here, Veronica !! Indeed, what exactly is a winner? .... smile ... congratulations on your writing being selected to be a feature this week and Welcome to PoetrySoup!!

Veronica Joseph

April 20, 2009 at 8:34 AM

WOW. Thank you everyone for your recognition and encouragement. All these feelings are so personal to me, I am glad that they touch others. God Bless you All.