Kim Rodrigues Poet Than-Bauk

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Wings Sing-Bt

secs, saint so still.
no restraint when
great wisdom - faint
from accent spills.
has my back - God
of love - soundtrack
keeps no record 
of wrongs, slow to
anger. i’ll go
where stirs the heart’s
former brr, warms
the soul, prefers
the morning song -
its airborne wings 
of the reborn.

12/8/2020
Bauk Than - Than Bauk
Sponsor: Charles Messina

secs - short for seconds
brr - cold

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Marilene Evans February 17, 2021 at 11:23 AM Congratulations, Kim. Kim Rodrigues February 17, 2021 at 3:37 PM Thank you!

Joanna Daniel February 17, 2021 at 12:02 AM Congratulations on your win, Kim, awesome job:) Kim Rodrigues February 17, 2021 at 4:22 AM Thank you, Jo!

Paula Goldsmith February 16, 2021 at 6:28 AM Congratulations on your win. Love your line, "has my back - God." He does. Enjoy your win/day with blessings.................. Kim Rodrigues February 17, 2021 at 4:22 AM Thank you, Paula!

Sara Kendrick February 16, 2021 at 2:26 AM Congrats on this expanded winner. Sara Kim Rodrigues February 17, 2021 at 4:22 AM Thank you, Sara!

Charles Messina February 15, 2021 at 9:23 PM Love the way you did this, Kim. Congrats on your 1st place win! Kim Rodrigues February 16, 2021 at 3:34 PM Thank you, Charles! Fun to write these!

John Watt December 9, 2020 at 2:24 PM A creative and wonderful write of faith. Best wishes in the contest, this is a winner to me ~ John Kim Rodrigues December 9, 2020 at 5:27 PM Thank you, John! :)

Sara Kendrick December 9, 2020 at 2:37 AM Very creative way to go with this contest. I like the spiritual side of it. Thanks for dropping by. Sara Kim Rodrigues December 9, 2020 at 4:23 AM Thank you, Sara!

Victor Buhagiar December 9, 2020 at 1:32 AM Sing on dear Kim. In the end we will all be happy. ~~ Kim Rodrigues December 9, 2020 at 4:23 AM We will and that hope is our reminder, my friend! God bless!