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Two poems today about blackbirds! A beautiful flight! A group of blackbirds is called a cloud.

Wings of Wonder

WINGS OF WONDER cool wings of blackbirds likened to blue angel jets spectators wonder a shadow that soars beneath a cloud that exhilarates 7/17/2017 tanka form
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Makama Avatar
July 22, 2017 at 11:47 AM
well crafted into an eye-romancing beauty... Your lines and words are just lovely... Its nice visiting one of your pages again..
Rodrigues Avatar
July 22, 2017 at 2:49 PM
Thanks so much, Funom!
Medders Tobechi Avatar
July 18, 2017 at 1:35 PM
A very well written tanka and I can see the two voices clearly.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 18, 2017 at 8:07 PM
Thanks, Janis!
Sands Avatar
July 18, 2017 at 1:28 PM
I can see it Kim. Thanks for sharing :)
Rodrigues Avatar
July 18, 2017 at 8:08 PM
Thanks, Heidi!
Clinton Avatar
July 18, 2017 at 1:09 PM
Beautiful!!! The imagery is just stunning! I'm in wonder just by reading this!
Rodrigues Avatar
July 18, 2017 at 1:12 PM
Such a wonder to watch these beauties today. Always fun to see through poet eyes! God's air show! Thanks, Paige!
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