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Wings of Wonder

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Two poems today about blackbirds! A beautiful flight! A group of blackbirds is called a cloud.

WINGS OF WONDER

cool wings of blackbirds
likened to blue angel jets
spectators wonder
a shadow that soars beneath
a cloud that exhilarates

7/17/2017
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Funom Makama
Date: 7/22/2017 11:47:00 AM
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well crafted into an eye-romancing beauty... Your lines and words are just lovely... Its nice visiting one of your pages again..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/22/2017 2:49:00 PM
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Thanks so much, Funom!
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 7/18/2017 1:35:00 PM
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A very well written tanka and I can see the two voices clearly.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/18/2017 8:07:00 PM
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Thanks, Janis!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/18/2017 1:28:00 PM
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I can see it Kim. Thanks for sharing :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/18/2017 8:08:00 PM
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Thanks, Heidi!
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Paige Clinton
Date: 7/18/2017 1:09:00 PM
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Beautiful!!! The imagery is just stunning! I'm in wonder just by reading this!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/18/2017 1:12:00 PM
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Such a wonder to watch these beauties today. Always fun to see through poet eyes! God's air show! Thanks, Paige!

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