Wings of Wonder

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Two poems today about blackbirds! A beautiful flight! A group of blackbirds is called a cloud.

WINGS OF WONDER cool wings of blackbirds likened to blue angel jets spectators wonder a shadow that soars beneath a cloud that exhilarates 7/17/2017 tanka form

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Funom Makama

Date: 7/22/2017 11:47:00 AM

well crafted into an eye-romancing beauty... Your lines and words are just lovely... Its nice visiting one of your pages again..

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/22/2017 2:49:00 PM

Thanks so much, Funom!

Niall Fulham

Date: 7/18/2017 4:54:00 PM

Hi Kim , exciting Tanka , very enjoyable read :)))hugs

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/18/2017 8:07:00 PM

Thanks, Niall!

Janis Thompson

Date: 7/18/2017 1:35:00 PM

A very well written tanka and I can see the two voices clearly.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/18/2017 8:07:00 PM

Thanks, Janis!

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/18/2017 1:28:00 PM

I can see it Kim. Thanks for sharing :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/18/2017 8:08:00 PM

Thanks, Heidi!

Paige Clinton

Date: 7/18/2017 1:09:00 PM

Beautiful!!! The imagery is just stunning! I'm in wonder just by reading this!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/18/2017 1:12:00 PM

Such a wonder to watch these beauties today. Always fun to see through poet eyes! God's air show! Thanks, Paige!