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Wings

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Wonder

bee pollinates blooms hummingbird nips at nectar flurry of wee wings

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 9/10/2019 9:53:00 PM
Love this ~
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Date: 8/25/2019 11:40:00 PM
Oh spring and summer... love it... Excellent use of words... lovely pic too. Ann
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Date: 7/23/2019 7:09:00 PM
just flying by to say hi!! i did not see any new poem of yours to read but I am thinking of you.
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Date: 7/11/2019 4:27:00 PM
So beautiful Dear Carolyn.
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Date: 7/11/2019 8:13:00 AM
A lovely haiku Carolyn. Flurry of wee wings, perfect.
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Date: 7/9/2019 1:29:00 PM
such a sweet write - loved your collab with Paul too, by the way xx
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Date: 7/6/2019 5:00:00 PM
So happy to be here again..reading your beautiful haiku.
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Date: 7/3/2019 1:54:00 PM
an exquisite haiku Carolyn, how I would love to see one of these cute birds for real:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/29/2019 2:25:00 AM
I love hummingbirds; this was a beautiful Haiku.
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Date: 6/22/2019 7:31:00 PM
oh that last line was so adorable!
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Date: 6/22/2019 6:32:00 PM
Beautiful verse and well written Haiku.. Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/22/2019 2:45:00 AM
Hi Carolyn, A beautiful write and a sure winner - Hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 6/21/2019 5:16:00 PM
'flurry of wee wings' - such a charming line, best of luck for the contest!
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Date: 6/21/2019 12:39:00 PM
I love your imagery, Carolyn, and the way you combined 'birds & bees' to attract our attention. gl in the contest. Hugs // paul
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 6/24/2019 4:32:00 PM
I don't know how to separate the birds from the bees. I think the nuns in Catholic school had the same frustration! Thanks for reading, Paul. I especially appreciate your input on haiku as you are a master at the form.
Date: 6/21/2019 12:26:00 PM
I adore this Carolyn. The hummingbird is one of my favorite birds. My mother in law actually got one tame enough to eat from her hand and my father in law got a photo to prove it. Amazing! This little gem is a fave from me! I hope it is a top winner! : ) xxoo
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Date: 6/20/2019 4:03:00 PM
Very nice Carolyn :)
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 6/21/2019 12:01:00 PM
Thanks, Heidi! I love your Moment in Time free verse.
Date: 6/20/2019 3:08:00 PM
Excellent imagery, Carolyn..hummingbird in your succinct words.
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