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Wings

of

Wonder

Wings of Wonder

bee pollinates blooms
hummingbird nips at nectar
     flurry of wee wings

birdnaturehaiku

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Quoth Theraven

Date: 5/13/2021 7:06:00 AM

Carolyn, Lively 'flurry of wee wings' in nature's finest..., when brought to your day they return with a gift. -Ricgard

Hello There

Date: 9/10/2019 9:53:00 PM

Love this ~

Ann Foster

Date: 8/25/2019 11:40:00 PM

Oh spring and summer... love it... Excellent use of words... lovely pic too. Ann

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/23/2019 7:09:00 PM

just flying by to say hi!! i did not see any new poem of yours to read but I am thinking of you.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/11/2019 4:27:00 PM

So beautiful Dear Carolyn.

Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 7/11/2019 8:13:00 AM

A lovely haiku Carolyn. Flurry of wee wings, perfect.

Jack Horne

Date: 7/9/2019 1:29:00 PM

such a sweet write - loved your collab with Paul too, by the way xx

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/6/2019 5:00:00 PM

So happy to be here again..reading your beautiful haiku.

Jan Allison

Date: 7/3/2019 1:54:00 PM

an exquisite haiku Carolyn, how I would love to see one of these cute birds for real:-) hugs Jan xx

M. L. Kiser

Date: 6/29/2019 2:25:00 AM

I love hummingbirds; this was a beautiful Haiku.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/22/2019 7:31:00 PM

oh that last line was so adorable!

Eve Roper

Date: 6/22/2019 6:32:00 PM

Beautiful verse and well written Haiku.. Hugs Eve

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/22/2019 2:45:00 AM

Hi Carolyn, A beautiful write and a sure winner - Hugs, Jennifer.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 6/21/2019 5:16:00 PM

'flurry of wee wings' - such a charming line, best of luck for the contest!

Paul Callus

Date: 6/21/2019 12:39:00 PM

I love your imagery, Carolyn, and the way you combined 'birds & bees' to attract our attention. gl in the contest. Hugs // paul

Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 6/24/2019 4:32:00 PM

I don't know how to separate the birds from the bees. I think the nuns in Catholic school had the same frustration! Thanks for reading, Paul. I especially appreciate your input on haiku as you are a master at the form.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/21/2019 12:26:00 PM

I adore this Carolyn. The hummingbird is one of my favorite birds. My mother in law actually got one tame enough to eat from her hand and my father in law got a photo to prove it. Amazing! This little gem is a fave from me! I hope it is a top winner! : ) xxoo