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Wings of a Butterfly

So brittle the heart can be
Like the wings of a butterfly
Do touch and grasp
But don't bend, even slightly
Wrap it in your warm embrace
But don't squeeze too tightly
For there's no disclaimer
That reads "Handle with Care,"
So pick it up, hold it rightly
Then set it down, very gently
Your first poem on Poetry Soup Poetry Contest (Winner: 1st Place) Sponsored by: Silent One Date submitted: 08/22/2020 Date originally written: 08/13/2012 Date posted: 03/22/2016
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Andresen Avatar
August 24, 2020 at 4:11 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Edward ... I remember how exciting it was to post my first poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ibeh Avatar
August 24, 2020 at 6:55 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise:-) Congratulations to you as well!
One Avatar
August 24, 2020 at 2:57 AM
the butterfly inspires many a poet and I can see the inspiration in your first post on here... This was not really a contest, it was an opportunity to showcase your first poem and I am glad you entered. Thank you.
Ibeh Avatar
August 24, 2020 at 3:41 AM
Thank you for the feedback and placement of my debut poem, Silent One:-) Have a blessed day!
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 29, 2020 at 10:48 AM
Hello Edward, I am reading your very first poem. Butterflies are beautiful they are seen in many beautiful colors. they are very delicate. I enjoyed this poem. Enjoy your day my fiend. Be safe.
Ibeh Avatar
April 29, 2020 at 11:49 AM
Thank you for visiting my very first poem, Darlene:-) So glad you liked it! Be safe, too, my friend!
Robinson Jr. Avatar
December 7, 2019 at 8:39 AM
Such an elegant, cerebral poem, Mr. I. The depth of thought/simplicity of expression is of stellar Cobham caliber. You catch my drift, I'm sure of this. GrEaT poetic artwork, friend-o! Love and smiles and smiles of joy forever.
Ibeh Avatar
December 7, 2019 at 12:46 PM
Thank you for visiting my debut poem, Freddie:-) Much appreciated.
Lamoureux Avatar
May 11, 2019 at 5:09 PM
An excellent first piece. Thanks for your visit.
Ibeh Avatar
May 12, 2019 at 9:41 AM
Thank you so much, Richard:-)
Moorman Avatar
August 16, 2018 at 3:24 PM
Edward, My Brother, I am enjoying the afternoon relaxing, after doing extensive yard work, and reading your wonderful poems. Thank you for using the talent God Blessed you with to share it with others.
Ibeh Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 6:32 AM
Thank you so much, Curtis. Much appreciated.
Roper Avatar
July 15, 2018 at 6:48 PM
This write shows the person you are, Edward, a warm hearted, gentleman. I'm so sorry you lost your poems, but maybe one of these days they will find you. I'm glad you're back to writing. Thank you again for my placement. It is not easy to be a sponsor and judge.. I did it for 2 or 3 years and just decided to stop.. But I learned so much from all the poets. Hugs Eve
Ibeh Avatar
July 15, 2018 at 9:33 PM
Thank you so much for the wonderful comments, Eve! You're very kind. I'm glad I'm back to writing as well!:-)
Gauthier Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 4:34 PM
Lovely, Edward. Very sweet.
Ibeh Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 6:49 PM
Thank you, Line!
Austin Avatar
March 29, 2016 at 2:16 PM
A brief but very meaningful statement. Congrats, daver
Andresen Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 2:31 PM
- What lovely poem, Edward - Welcome to Poetry soup - // Anne-Lise :)
A  Avatar
March 26, 2016 at 2:26 AM
Edward Ibeh, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
Ibeh Avatar
March 26, 2016 at 5:58 PM
So nice to meet you, SKAT! I'd love to be your poetry soup friend!:-) Looking forward to reading your poems as well. Thanks for the welcome! XOXO...
A   Avatar
March 23, 2016 at 4:21 AM
Edward,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
Ibeh Avatar
March 24, 2016 at 9:04 AM
Thanks for the welcome, Linda. Looking forward to reading your poems, too.
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