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Wings of a Butterfly

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So brittle the heart can be Like the wings of a butterfly Do touch and grasp But don't bend, even slightly Wrap it in your warm embrace But don't squeeze too tightly For there's no disclaimer That reads "Handle with Care," So pick it up, hold it rightly Then set it down, very gently Your first poem on Poetry Soup Poetry Contest (Winner: 1st Place) Sponsored by: Silent One Date submitted: 08/22/2020 Date originally written: 08/13/2012 Date posted: 03/22/2016

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/24/2020 4:11:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win, Edward ... I remember how exciting it was to post my first poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/24/2020 6:55:00 AM

Thank you, Anne-Lise:-) Congratulations to you as well!

Silent One

Date: 8/24/2020 2:57:00 AM

the butterfly inspires many a poet and I can see the inspiration in your first post on here... This was not really a contest, it was an opportunity to showcase your first poem and I am glad you entered. Thank you.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/24/2020 3:41:00 AM

Thank you for the feedback and placement of my debut poem, Silent One:-) Have a blessed day!

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/29/2020 10:48:00 AM

Hello Edward, I am reading your very first poem. Butterflies are beautiful they are seen in many beautiful colors. they are very delicate. I enjoyed this poem. Enjoy your day my fiend. Be safe.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/29/2020 11:49:00 AM

Thank you for visiting my very first poem, Darlene:-) So glad you liked it! Be safe, too, my friend!

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 12/7/2019 8:39:00 AM

Such an elegant, cerebral poem, Mr. I. The depth of thought/simplicity of expression is of stellar Cobham caliber. You catch my drift, I'm sure of this. GrEaT poetic artwork, friend-o! Love and smiles and smiles of joy forever.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/7/2019 12:46:00 PM

Thank you for visiting my debut poem, Freddie:-) Much appreciated.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/11/2019 5:09:00 PM

An excellent first piece. Thanks for your visit.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/12/2019 9:41:00 AM

Thank you so much, Richard:-)

Curtis Moorman

Date: 8/16/2018 3:24:00 PM

Edward, My Brother, I am enjoying the afternoon relaxing, after doing extensive yard work, and reading your wonderful poems. Thank you for using the talent God Blessed you with to share it with others.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/17/2018 6:32:00 AM

Thank you so much, Curtis. Much appreciated.

Eve Roper

Date: 7/15/2018 6:48:00 PM

This write shows the person you are, Edward, a warm hearted, gentleman. I'm so sorry you lost your poems, but maybe one of these days they will find you. I'm glad you're back to writing. Thank you again for my placement. It is not easy to be a sponsor and judge.. I did it for 2 or 3 years and just decided to stop.. But I learned so much from all the poets. Hugs Eve

Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/15/2018 9:33:00 PM

Thank you so much for the wonderful comments, Eve! You're very kind. I'm glad I'm back to writing as well!:-)

Line Gauthier

Date: 7/5/2018 4:34:00 PM

Lovely, Edward. Very sweet.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/5/2018 6:49:00 PM

Thank you, Line!

Daver Austin

Date: 3/29/2016 2:16:00 PM

A brief but very meaningful statement. Congrats, daver

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/27/2016 2:31:00 PM

- What lovely poem, Edward - Welcome to Poetry soup - // Anne-Lise :)

Skat A

Date: 3/26/2016 2:26:00 AM

Edward Ibeh, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/26/2016 5:58:00 PM

So nice to meet you, SKAT! I'd love to be your poetry soup friend!:-) Looking forward to reading your poems as well. Thanks for the welcome! XOXO...

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/23/2016 4:21:00 AM

Edward,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/24/2016 9:04:00 AM

Thanks for the welcome, Linda. Looking forward to reading your poems, too.