Wings: My Favorite Things

Angel wings are not feathered but they are real,
Made from lighter stuff and stronger. 
They have a metaphysical feel,
And last an eternity longer.

The feel of an Angel wing is not a sensation like touch.
It’s on a higher more philosophical plane.
The usual senses are only a crutch,
Like trying to explain snow while in the rain.

To feel an angel wing flutter, 
One must “ know thyself ”,
And remove the “me” clutter,
To reveal the naked shelf.

You  know that fellow that always angers you,
And makes you retaliate every time?
Remember recently when he was through,
You smiled and didn’t even mind?

And how with your children, you pray to be patient,
And cry and blow up instead?
Then why today, when they tried your patience,
Those were tears of joy you shed?

These experiences and many others,
When asked for in earnest prayer,
Are simply Angel wing flutters,
Teaching us how to live and care.

These are the feel of Angel wings,
Not privy to the usual five,
But made of heavenly things,
Sublime, real, ..fully alive.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 4/24/2010 12:28:00 AM
Excellent. You give advice well in your poetry - I like your style! Tinkerpoet
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Date: 4/10/2010 4:47:00 PM
Really great read Robert.Thanks for your kind comment.Were the best us Teresa's.Teresa
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Date: 3/30/2010 10:34:00 AM
that was lovely, really enjoyed that one
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Date: 3/11/2010 2:49:00 PM
This was great really enjoyed it.Thanks for your kind and sweet comment.Teresa
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Date: 3/11/2010 6:37:00 AM
Wow, what a take on such a beautiful thought! I Love it! Nice Robert! Love Jeralynn
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Date: 3/3/2010 12:55:00 PM
Beautiful poem, Robert. I had just been in prayer asking for Holy Spirit's guidance about ...things..., thought I'd check in here quickly before getting back to work...and found your latest post. God surely has your ear and you transcribe what you hear so wonderfully. Another one of yours to my favorites. Thank you.
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Date: 3/3/2010 7:55:00 AM
I want to see and feel this Tinkerbell you have so wonderfully cultivated. BIG LOVE, daver
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Date: 3/2/2010 11:53:00 PM
this is an AMAZING poem, i'm such a fan of your work!
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Date: 3/1/2010 5:35:00 PM
BEAUTIFUL POEM
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Date: 2/28/2010 2:29:00 PM
I know what you're talking about, Robert..now that you've put it into these beautiful words. Goes to my favs. I pray each day to learn how to live and care deeply. Thanks for taking your precious time to read and leave your encouraging comments for me! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 2/28/2010 1:16:00 PM
I love angel's wings...they give me freedom,, beautiful..Charma
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Date: 2/28/2010 9:45:00 AM
Such a lovely view of angels' wings, Robert. Much insight throughout this poem and the third verse is awesome! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/28/2010 9:30:00 AM
Angel wings...beautiful sentiments and truths are held in these words. Very nice poetry. Smiles, Dane Ann
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