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Wings In Internal Appease

With closed eyes she thinks Angels wings change from black to white Her contemplation http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/fantasy-3.php

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/20/2010 12:37:00 PM

INteresting one, James.Boy I am having to log on alot to get my comments done. GEEEZ. LUv, andrea

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/17/2010 11:50:00 PM

In dreams all darkness change to light..the Wings change from black to white and in the sky she flies..Lovely poem.. going to my favs..Charma

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 4/17/2010 5:38:00 PM

enjoyed your poem today, how are you? I had a good day visiting family and such. Even got in a little shopping.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/17/2010 5:22:00 PM

The dark angel appears to "see the light" when she closes her eyes. How intriguing, James. Awesome poem for my favorites! Love, Carolyn

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/17/2010 5:14:00 PM

excellent entry line to a short story! exxxxpaaaaaaaaannnnd! Light & Love (I hope you're searching out your animal spirit guardian for my contest? perhaps it's a kyloe bull...with fine proud horns..that's what I see guarding you!)