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Written on October 13, 2023

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Wings

Graceful Autumn’s dance, light Raining on the sweet smile, Washing away the darkness, light Fluid
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Empress Avatar
October 17, 2023 at 5:25 AM
Wow what a beautiful picture to go with your cinquain! Absolutely stunning and so magical! Made me dream away as i read now with the picture as the backdrop. “ raining on the sweet smile” i love that! And also how youve written “ washing away darkness” such a soul warming take! Very well delivered . Thank you for writing. Congratulations
Goldsmith Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 11:02 AM
A wonderful write/picture. Have a fun day writing away.
Fowler Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 8:38 AM
I like the lightness in this write Gina. Nicely done. :)
Dietrich Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 1:05 AM
love how the first and last words are so similar. Lovely poem.
One Avatar
October 14, 2023 at 4:25 AM
This is lovely.. love the imagery!
Hawley Avatar
October 13, 2023 at 7:08 PM
Nice job.
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