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Wings

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Written on October 13, 2023

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Graceful Autumn’s dance, light Raining on the sweet smile, Washing away the darkness, light Fluid

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023


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Ink Empress
Date: 10/17/2023 5:25:00 AM
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Wow what a beautiful picture to go with your cinquain! Absolutely stunning and so magical! Made me dream away as i read now with the picture as the backdrop. “ raining on the sweet smile” i love that! And also how youve written “ washing away darkness” such a soul warming take! Very well delivered . Thank you for writing. Congratulations
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/15/2023 11:02:00 AM
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A wonderful write/picture. Have a fun day writing away.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/15/2023 8:38:00 AM
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I like the lightness in this write Gina. Nicely done. :)
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/15/2023 1:05:00 AM
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love how the first and last words are so similar. Lovely poem.
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Silent One
Date: 10/14/2023 4:25:00 AM
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This is lovely.. love the imagery!
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Miranda Hawley
Date: 10/13/2023 7:08:00 PM
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Nice job.
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