Dr.Ram Mehta Poet Rhyme

Wingless Does What Winged One Can'T-W

Awakening in the morn, with mind's delight
I decide to write something bright on plight.
Biting my lips tight, I continue to fight
Coming across Poems have wings of The Rambling poet

I desire something light and quite to write
With all the feelings of joy, I take a deep breath
Thoughts do come and go, stop not when ready for a flight
They have wings, here, my poem reaches the contest.

It is said even where the Sun's rays are unable to reach
Though wingless, thoughts of the poets are able to reach.

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Eighth Placement
For Poems have wings contest:

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Robin Davis March 5, 2014 at 9:23 PM Dr. Ram Such a creative write describing poems as wings. Nice analogy and write. Thanks for the congrats on my Birthday poem.

Carol Sunshine Brown July 30, 2010 at 5:34 AM Congratulations Dr. Ram on your win in Constance~A Rambling Poet's contest "Poems Have Wings". Love, Carol

Francine Roberts July 29, 2010 at 10:17 AM congrats on your win in the contest Dr. Ram

Andrea Dietrich July 28, 2010 at 8:18 PM congratulations for your win in the contest ! Luv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 28, 2010 at 4:33 PM Congrats Dr. Ram on your winning poem in Constance's contest with this wonderful write of perfectin in poetry.. enjoy another sweet victory .. with luv..

Joyce Johnson July 28, 2010 at 3:21 PM Yes a poet words can reach around the world. Congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, Joyce

Kabuteng P.Ink K. July 27, 2010 at 1:18 AM this is really beautiful, Dr. Ram-- I really like how you related wings to writing!! I'm sure this will do well in Constance's contest :) -- btw just an extra "t" in "biting" hope this helps -- nikko :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 26, 2010 at 8:11 PM Really special write Dr. Ram.. good luck in the contest... its a beauty of rare quality and good luck in the contest.. with luv.. thankxxx for your best wishes also on my entries ..

Andrea Dietrich July 26, 2010 at 7:43 PM oh, gosh, well, if we were supposed to write about wings, you got this one in the bag, Dr. Ram!! I love the title too. Good job. Andrea

Ravindra K Kapoor July 26, 2010 at 7:18 PM Outstandingly beautiful. Great Poem and great imagination and a very true one also. My good wishes for your success in the contest. Love and best wishes..........Ravindra.......Dr. R Mehta

James Marshall Goff July 26, 2010 at 6:55 PM your last line is priceless! Doc! jimbo