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Wingless Angel

Wingless Angel Earliest morning, twilight blend Near the horizon silver pretend. Breeze is gentle, weather delight Happy together, wishful and bright Who else is here ready to fly? need and greed reason to cry. Lonely, I am, driven by pain; nowhere to go, nothing to gain. Where is this place, an orbiting ball? Maybe a prison, with no doors and wall. I wish to fly, higher than sky. Without any wing, I would rather die. Haloo 5/2014

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Date: 10/15/2017 9:35:00 AM
Sooner or later you'll fly when your soul reaches for the sky.., for now, you are an angel in waiting.., earning your wings... A beautiful write of mortal heartache Pashang. I see it won a contest - a belated congratulations. Your poem is deep, evocative, thought-provoking and palpable with pain. Soulful write!
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 10/16/2017 9:26:00 AM
Thanks Susan for your understanding....Always,
Date: 3/10/2016 3:56:00 PM
Hi Pashang, firstly i give my belated Congratulations on your win in the contest. There is always such deep emotion in what you write Pashang. Your words touch the heart and mind so deeply. That is your gift. A top rating, seven, for this write my friend....Vlad.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 3/10/2016 6:06:00 PM
Thanks Vlad, you are so nice and talented... I don't remember this contest, but thanks anyway.. Pashang
Date: 1/6/2016 12:45:00 AM
Pashang,, Congratulations on your win. LINDA
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 1/6/2016 4:21:00 PM
Thanks my friend
Date: 1/4/2016 5:43:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your winning work..Way to go for this contest..Congrats..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 1/4/2016 10:42:00 AM
Thanks Sara
Date: 1/3/2016 11:30:00 PM
PASHANG, Congratulations on your "Angel" win. **SKAT**
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 1/4/2016 10:41:00 AM
Thanks SKAT
Date: 1/3/2016 1:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Pashang, may you always fly high!! From Jean
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 1/4/2016 10:40:00 AM
Thanks Jean
Date: 1/2/2016 2:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this delightful poem. Love, Joyce
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 1/2/2016 2:53:00 PM
Thanks Joyce
Date: 1/1/2016 8:54:00 PM
Congratulations Pashang.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 1/2/2016 1:00:00 AM
Thank you Nayda for selecting my work. Happy new year.
Date: 10/17/2015 12:30:00 PM
this is a nice poem,
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 10/17/2015 1:25:00 PM
Thanks Diane Do you have wings?