Pashang Salehi Poet Rhyme

Wingless Angel

       Wingless Angel 

				Wingless Angel 

Earliest morning, twilight blend
Near the horizon, silver pretend.
The breeze is gentle, weather delight. 
Happy together, wishful, and bright
Who else is here ready to fly?
Need and greed are reasons to cry.
Lonely, I am, driven by pain;
nowhere to go, nothing to gain.
Where is this place, an orbiting ball?
It could be a prison with no doors and wall.
I wish to fly higher than the sky.
Without any wings, I would rather die.

Haloo
5/2014

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Susan Ashley October 15, 2017 at 9:35 AM Sooner or later you'll fly when your soul reaches for the sky.., for now, you are an angel in waiting.., earning your wings... A beautiful write of mortal heartache Pashang. I see it won a contest - a belated congratulations. Your poem is deep, evocative, thought-provoking and palpable with pain. Soulful write! Pashang Salehi October 16, 2017 at 9:26 AM Thanks Susan for your understanding....Always,

Vladislav Raven March 10, 2016 at 3:56 PM Hi Pashang, firstly i give my belated Congratulations on your win in the contest. There is always such deep emotion in what you write Pashang. Your words touch the heart and mind so deeply. That is your gift. A top rating, seven, for this write my friend....Vlad. Pashang Salehi March 10, 2016 at 6:06 PM Thanks Vlad, you are so nice and talented... I don't remember this contest, but thanks anyway.. Pashang

Poet Destroyer A January 6, 2016 at 12:45 AM Pashang,, Congratulations on your win. LINDA Pashang Salehi January 6, 2016 at 4:21 PM Thanks my friend

Sara Kendrick January 4, 2016 at 5:43 AM Enjoyed reading your winning work..Way to go for this contest..Congrats..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Pashang Salehi January 4, 2016 at 10:42 AM Thanks Sara

Skat A January 3, 2016 at 11:30 PM PASHANG, Congratulations on your "Angel" win. **SKAT** Pashang Salehi January 4, 2016 at 10:41 AM Thanks SKAT

Jean Mcloughlin January 3, 2016 at 1:29 PM Congratulations on your win Pashang, may you always fly high!! From Jean Pashang Salehi January 4, 2016 at 10:40 AM Thanks Jean

Joyce Johnson January 2, 2016 at 2:05 PM Congratulations on your win with this delightful poem. Love, Joyce Pashang Salehi January 2, 2016 at 2:53 PM Thanks Joyce

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores January 1, 2016 at 8:54 PM Congratulations Pashang. Pashang Salehi January 2, 2016 at 1:00 AM Thank you Nayda for selecting my work. Happy new year.

Diane Christian October 17, 2015 at 12:30 PM this is a nice poem, Pashang Salehi October 17, 2015 at 1:25 PM Thanks Diane Do you have wings?