Winged Wonder of Love!.. Reggae

Be the birdie

                 in the tree!

Dancing high

                 color flash!

Be the birdie

                 in the tree!

Calling love

                 nest with thee!

Be the birdie

                 in the tree!

Dancing high

                 remember me!

Be the birdie

                 in the tree!


Swoop from branch


                 high above!


Be the birdie 


                 in the tree!
 

You had your chance


                       good
    now   
                                 
                           bye

               love! 

(repeat entire refrain)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Guzzi Avatar
July 31, 2009 at 1:45 PM
What's the tune Jimmy? Light & Love
Bird Avatar
July 31, 2009 at 1:22 PM
Yes, love comes and sometimes stays but, the bitter endings are all the same. They end in goodbyes. Great Lyric James, you always deliver in style my friend.
Rhinem Avatar
July 31, 2009 at 8:34 AM
Smile! Well, you know what they say; with every ending there's a new beginning...."Hello James!!" I am sincerely and truly sorry that I have failed to return to "Your Beautiful Heart" before now; pre-occupied and stuff!!? Yet, "You" do remain in thoughts! And I knew that I would get to "You" sooner than later!? "Excellent Write Here" ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'You & Your Loves' Always, John!!!" ~ "Have A Blessed & Beautiful Day My Friend!!!" Bye ~
Kurth Avatar
July 31, 2009 at 7:44 AM
I love the flow and rhythm of the poem. I could feel myself bopping to the drums in my mind. All the best, Krista
Richards Avatar
July 31, 2009 at 6:44 AM
Can hear this sung in my mind!! Nicely done, James!!!
Fraser Avatar
July 31, 2009 at 5:31 AM
Kool lyric James, a delight to read and sing along to>>James
Kelly Avatar
July 31, 2009 at 1:21 AM
Nice flow to this James . Would love to hear the beat ...
Strand Avatar
July 31, 2009 at 12:55 AM
Rythmic words Jim.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
Chircop Avatar
July 30, 2009 at 10:43 PM
This is sweet but the ending of goodbye is somehow sad--this is going to my favs because its different and a leasure to read--very sweet indeed--charma
Arteaga Avatar
July 30, 2009 at 8:04 PM
i hear the beats! very good song i enjoyed
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