Wine-Spiration

The man most prone to tears
is one who's drunk some beers

the man most prone to sigh
is one who's drunk some rye

the man most prone to pee
is one given to whisky

the one most prone to mourn
is one whose tea's laced with bourbon

but the man who believes all he's seen
is one who's soaked to the bones with gin!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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March 8, 2016 at 11:32 AM
Osayande, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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March 6, 2021 at 2:00 PM
Hello Linda. Thank you so much for your kind words. I'm back...hopefully long enough this time.. :)
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December 15, 2009 at 4:28 PM
Don't know about alcoholic beverages. You have good rhyme here only one or two kinda off. Keep the creatve pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara
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March 6, 2021 at 2:01 PM
Thank you so much!!!
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