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Wine With No Glass

Your body empty

               I shall pour into you slow

                                         as good wine in time....

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Poet Destroyer A

December 10, 2012 at 8:20 PM

on the 12th day of x-mass my true love gave to me~ 12 empty wine glasses~~.. 11 gliding eagles ~~10 warming warmers ~~ 9 ladies souping~~ 8 cherished moments~~ 7 sexy sins~~ 6 sipping cups~~ 5 moments of you and me....4 kissing songs.. 3 old pens.. 2 cradles of love ... and a warm place in his arms and fair tree....

Wilma Neels

January 9, 2012 at 1:29 PM

Enjoyed this write of yours tonight especially dig the title you chose Michael.. No worries about explaining hey, I just love the poem and the dedication, it is beautiful You are a great friend. Wilma

Sara Kendrick

October 14, 2010 at 3:20 PM

Interesting thoughts penned...Sara

Francine Roberts

October 10, 2010 at 10:56 AM

wow, love it

Carolyn Devonshire

October 10, 2010 at 6:01 AM

Very gentle, warm and touching senryu, Michael. A very original metaphor as well. Beautifully written, my friend. Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

October 8, 2010 at 8:26 PM

Lovely one, Michael. And what a neat title! Luv, Andrea

John Rhinem

October 8, 2010 at 2:52 PM

Smile ~ "Lovely Poe, 'My Dear Gifted Friend,' Michael J. Falotico!" ~ One can see the possibilities of a fine vintaged wine being poured into perhaps, a sweetened chalice...."Thank You" for stopping by &, I have to run right now but I shall see "Your Brightness" again soon ~ "Love & Warmth to You & Yours, Always," John!:) ~

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

October 8, 2010 at 2:49 PM

Well don't blame Roseanna for being a Jets fan.. that Mark Sanchez is something something luv.. and u can tell your fair lady I support her on that choice....haha..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

October 8, 2010 at 1:57 PM

Wow Wow Wow.. u sure know how to mix words well luv.. thankxxx for this one and for the update on the boys in blue... so hard to keep up with Yankees and Giants schedules ... those post season baseball games at my house are awesome with my sons and Ron screaming at every pitch..luv.. and lets not forget those fighting Phillies.. two of my sons adore them... but New York is in my heart... Jersey Girl with NY luv..

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