Windy Day In the City

WINDY   DAY  IN  THE  CITY

Strain  unwillingly  round the  city street  corner 
Into   flurry  of  police   klaxon-horn  or 
Double-deck bus   or  hobo with beard  a-grizzle.
Saddened  people  rushing  in the drizzle,  
Wet  wind picking up,   weather  getting worse.
Breezy  gust snatches  a thousand leaves  to disperse 
From the autumn  trees  barely  awake:
Sudden blizzard  of   giant  golden  snowflakes
Obliterates  the wet sidewalks,  paved with  gold.
People smiling, surprised at it all,  pause and behold,
Brush  them off shoulders again and again. 
Ah  the glory of it.  No one thinks  of rain.
Never was a  transformation done so well : 
A heaven snatched from the jaws of hell.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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November 3, 2010 at 10:20 AM
Thank you for posting your poetry that we may all enjoy it here at PoetrySoup Sydney. Love, Carol
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November 2, 2010 at 2:21 PM
Oh how wonderful to receive snow instead of rain, Sydney. In the midst of this hectic city scene, I see a jewel from nature. What a great, uplifting write! And thanks for letting me know about the dialect; I would never have known from reading your work. You have a good command of "proper" English! Love, Carolyn
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