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Windswept Dreams

On the edge where sea meets sky, A canvas stretched, the kites soar high. With every gust, my spirit flies, Chasing waves beneath the blue skies. Harnessed freedom, the ocean's embrace, Dancing with the wind, a thrilling race. Salt on my skin, the sun's warm glow, In this moment, I’m alive, I know.

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Date: 2/13/2025 10:18:00 AM
Hello Scott Hh, this is aq wonderful poem. i can picture you flying the kite. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
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Date: 2/11/2025 8:01:00 AM
The poem effectively captures the raw emotion and sense of loss conveyed in the song "Arianna" while maintaining a high level of poetic artistry. It's a testament to your skill as a poet. I particularly appreciate the way you've used the rhyme scheme to structure the poem's emotional journey, mirroring the ebb and flow of the speaker's grief. This is a well-crafted and moving piece that demonstrates a strong command of both poetic form and emotional expression.
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Scott Hh
Date: 2/11/2025 9:25:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 2/9/2025 5:03:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Scott Hh
Date: 2/11/2025 9:25:00 AM
Thank you

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