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Windswept

sailing on fresh breeze
my hat is off for a ride
alluring blue skies

fragrant flowers cringe
until gold moment all's clear
windsongs at windows

a determined quest
from orange clouds to the ground
in in-between hours

scattered grave matter
in the whirlpool of hued days
sparkling in slow time

Copyright © Evelyn Judy Buehler | Year Posted 2023

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Kim Rodrigues Date: 8/29/2023 1:33:00 PM my hat is off for a ride… from orange clouds to the ground in in-between hours. Your poetry permeates the mind in wonderful ways! Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 8/29/2023 3:48:00 PM Thank you for your heartwarming appreciation of the poetic images, Kim. Have a nice evening.

Silent One Date: 8/28/2023 1:56:00 AM A wonderful collection of haiku, full of imagery and great use of words.. ncie one Evelyn. Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 8/28/2023 11:08:00 AM Your gracious remarks are very much appreciated, Silent One. Blessings.

Christina Bowring Date: 8/27/2023 8:01:00 PM This is a beautiful poem Evelyn with lovely imagery. I especially love the line, ‘windsongs at windows’ and the last stanza. Very poetic. Really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing. Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 8/27/2023 8:52:00 PM I am deeply grateful for your warm, encouraging remarks, Christina. Have a great week. :)

Paula Goldsmith Date: 8/27/2023 1:59:00 PM A beautiful Haiku write/pretty picture. I enjoyed it. Have a great day/week............. Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 8/27/2023 8:48:00 PM Your gracious words are such a thrill, Paula. Thank you very much! Hope your week is nice, too. :)

Joe Dimino Date: 8/27/2023 7:01:00 AM Lovely imagery, Evelyn; one of the things I miss about youth, riding a motorcycle in the mountains, the rush of wind and matter -- it was all good. Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 8/27/2023 11:27:00 AM Joe, I'm glad this poem held pleasant associations for you. Thank you very much!

Vijay Pandit Date: 8/27/2023 5:24:00 AM Cleverly designed windswept images, Evelyn. I liked them al but especially the last one: in the whirlpool of hued days sparkling in slow time--so well said! Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 8/27/2023 11:25:00 AM Thank you for your thoughtful appreciation, Vijay. So nice to know you enjoyed this haiku series. Have a wonderful day.

Kim Rodrigues Date: 8/26/2023 8:04:00 PM Love that first verse! Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 8/26/2023 9:37:00 PM How nice that is to know! Thank you, Kim.

Yann Rolland Date: 8/26/2023 6:10:00 PM enjoyed this moment of grace in your poem reading, thanks yann Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 8/26/2023 9:36:00 PM Thank you for your kind expressions, Yann.