Evelyn Judy Buehler Poet Haiku

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Windswept

sailing on fresh breeze
my hat is off for a ride
alluring blue skies

fragrant flowers cringe
until gold moment all's clear
windsongs at windows

a determined quest
from orange clouds to the ground
in in-between hours

scattered grave matter
in the whirlpool of hued days
sparkling in slow time

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Kim Rodrigues August 29, 2023 at 1:33 PM my hat is off for a ride… from orange clouds to the ground in in-between hours. Your poetry permeates the mind in wonderful ways! Evelyn Judy Buehler August 29, 2023 at 3:48 PM Thank you for your heartwarming appreciation of the poetic images, Kim. Have a nice evening.

Silent One August 28, 2023 at 1:56 AM A wonderful collection of haiku, full of imagery and great use of words.. ncie one Evelyn. Evelyn Judy Buehler August 28, 2023 at 11:08 AM Your gracious remarks are very much appreciated, Silent One. Blessings.

Christina Bowring August 27, 2023 at 8:01 PM This is a beautiful poem Evelyn with lovely imagery. I especially love the line, ‘windsongs at windows’ and the last stanza. Very poetic. Really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing. Evelyn Judy Buehler August 27, 2023 at 8:52 PM I am deeply grateful for your warm, encouraging remarks, Christina. Have a great week. :)

Paula Goldsmith August 27, 2023 at 1:59 PM A beautiful Haiku write/pretty picture. I enjoyed it. Have a great day/week............. Evelyn Judy Buehler August 27, 2023 at 8:48 PM Your gracious words are such a thrill, Paula. Thank you very much! Hope your week is nice, too. :)

Joseph P. DiMino August 27, 2023 at 7:01 AM Lovely imagery, Evelyn; one of the things I miss about youth, riding a motorcycle in the mountains, the rush of wind and matter -- it was all good. Evelyn Judy Buehler August 27, 2023 at 11:27 AM Joe, I'm glad this poem held pleasant associations for you. Thank you very much!

Vijay Pandit August 27, 2023 at 5:24 AM Cleverly designed windswept images, Evelyn. I liked them al but especially the last one: in the whirlpool of hued days sparkling in slow time--so well said! Evelyn Judy Buehler August 27, 2023 at 11:25 AM Thank you for your thoughtful appreciation, Vijay. So nice to know you enjoyed this haiku series. Have a wonderful day.

Kim Rodrigues August 26, 2023 at 8:04 PM Love that first verse! Evelyn Judy Buehler August 26, 2023 at 9:37 PM How nice that is to know! Thank you, Kim.

Yann Rolland August 26, 2023 at 6:10 PM enjoyed this moment of grace in your poem reading, thanks yann Evelyn Judy Buehler August 26, 2023 at 9:36 PM Thank you for your kind expressions, Yann.