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sailing on fresh breeze my hat is off for a ride alluring blue skies fragrant flowers cringe until gold moment all's clear windsongs at windows a determined quest from orange clouds to the ground in in-between hours scattered grave matter in the whirlpool of hued days sparkling in slow time

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Date: 8/29/2023 1:33:00 PM
my hat is off for a ride… from orange clouds to the ground in in-between hours. Your poetry permeates the mind in wonderful ways!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/29/2023 3:48:00 PM
Thank you for your heartwarming appreciation of the poetic images, Kim. Have a nice evening.
Date: 8/28/2023 1:56:00 AM
A wonderful collection of haiku, full of imagery and great use of words.. ncie one Evelyn.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/28/2023 11:08:00 AM
Your gracious remarks are very much appreciated, Silent One. Blessings.
Date: 8/27/2023 8:01:00 PM
This is a beautiful poem Evelyn with lovely imagery. I especially love the line, ‘windsongs at windows’ and the last stanza. Very poetic. Really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/27/2023 8:52:00 PM
I am deeply grateful for your warm, encouraging remarks, Christina. Have a great week. :)
Date: 8/27/2023 1:59:00 PM
A beautiful Haiku write/pretty picture. I enjoyed it. Have a great day/week.............
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/27/2023 8:48:00 PM
Your gracious words are such a thrill, Paula. Thank you very much! Hope your week is nice, too. :)
Date: 8/27/2023 7:01:00 AM
Lovely imagery, Evelyn; one of the things I miss about youth, riding a motorcycle in the mountains, the rush of wind and matter -- it was all good.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/27/2023 11:27:00 AM
Joe, I'm glad this poem held pleasant associations for you. Thank you very much!
Date: 8/27/2023 5:24:00 AM
Cleverly designed windswept images, Evelyn. I liked them al but especially the last one: in the whirlpool of hued days sparkling in slow time--so well said!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/27/2023 11:25:00 AM
Thank you for your thoughtful appreciation, Vijay. So nice to know you enjoyed this haiku series. Have a wonderful day.
Date: 8/26/2023 8:04:00 PM
Love that first verse!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/26/2023 9:37:00 PM
How nice that is to know! Thank you, Kim.
Date: 8/26/2023 6:10:00 PM
enjoyed this moment of grace in your poem reading, thanks yann
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/26/2023 9:36:00 PM
Thank you for your kind expressions, Yann.

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