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once upon a time a wedding day handkerchief with lovely white lace an old garter belt borrowed and fastened on thigh a groom with blue eyes a nosegay bouquet tucked in baby’s breath fastened with ribbon the bride’s train so long ring bearer, flower girls ride for a couple hours then into the wind with the groomsman by her side — the unbridled bride 12/28/2018

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Date: 12/29/2018 7:38:00 AM
Well expressed Kim..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/29/2018 8:16:00 AM
Thank you, Silent!
Date: 12/28/2018 9:19:00 PM
An exquisite memory in the form of a choka. Wow! Wow! Wow! Nothing else will do. So Wow!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/28/2018 9:32:00 PM
Not a memory! Lol...didn’t run away with the groomsman! Thank you, Caren!
Date: 12/28/2018 8:15:00 PM
I was captured and enraptured by the gorgeous imagery and emotion of your poem. Beautiful, Kim. Warmest wishes for a happy new year.. ~Susan
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/28/2018 8:33:00 PM
Thank you, Susan! Happy New Year!
Date: 12/28/2018 7:09:00 PM
wow, I just LOVE this one. FAVED!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/28/2018 8:32:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea! <3 Kim
Date: 12/28/2018 2:05:00 PM
A very lovely word-painting; great line, "the unbridled bride".
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/28/2018 5:08:00 PM
Thanks, M.L.!
Date: 12/28/2018 1:32:00 PM
A very cute poem Kim. Well done, Best wishes and poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/28/2018 5:08:00 PM
Thank you, Jennifer! xx

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