Windstorm

skyscraper swaying
   eye to eye with gulls at play~
         put on my sea legs



12/28/2020

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/11/2021 5:21:00 PM

Hilarious write. Love it. Never thought o haiku as being funny before this one.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 1/13/2021 6:50:00 AM

Thank you Caren! ;), xomo

Jeff Connelly

Date: 12/30/2020 11:11:00 AM

This brings up two memories for me: Tokyo and the Twin Towers; but YOUR words are universal Maureen; speaking to the many. Brilliant!!!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/31/2020 7:53:00 AM

We have no skyscrapers in my town. xomo!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 12/30/2020 11:01:00 AM

Now why can't we have one tiny windstorm to kill all those pigeons ;) Big Hug.May I sincerely wish you a happy New Year. xovb ~~

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/31/2020 7:50:00 AM

Lol! Ya just might miss them when they’re gone. Thank you my friend, warmest wishes to you, and all the best for the new year, xomo, vb!

Quoth Theraven

Date: 12/29/2020 7:17:00 PM

Like the seagulls you have flown high through the storms this year Maureen. I will count myself lucky to sit Indian style at the crossroads of your life, and mine, reading your poetry in the next. -Richard

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/30/2020 9:25:00 AM

Thank you for your kindness, always, Richard. I wish I could read more, my brain is in bad state. Warmest wishes for the New Year, xomo