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Winds of Time

Unable to face the future alone;
she longs for happier days.
Kept out by winds of time.



Arlene Smith
02/15/15
Contest: In Praise Of A Kimo
Sponsor: Nette Onclaud
Visual #2

Copyright © Arlene Smith | Year Posted 2015

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Robert Lawrence

March 26, 2015 at 4:44 PM

That is so thought provoking.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

February 26, 2015 at 10:31 AM

three lines but speaks of volume!!!

February 23, 2015 at 10:00 PM

Wow, I can just feel the pressure against my heart. Swimming against the tide to never reach the shore. You broke our hearts in three lines.

February 16, 2015 at 9:39 AM

Brilliant...so much emotion packed into this little gem.

February 16, 2015 at 9:28 AM

Very nice, Arlene! I really like how you poetically interpreted this visual which is so intriguing. Best wishes in the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Andrea Dietrich

February 15, 2015 at 6:02 PM

my , i really need to get to this contest because it sure looks to be filling up super fast, and very nicely done, Arlene!!

February 15, 2015 at 5:29 PM

So beautifully penned Arlene - good luck in the contest:-)hugs jan xx

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