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Winds of Change

Fall brings mosaic colors of falling leaves, soon after hues dissipate to barren trees. Storms churn clouds in mighty thunder, thrashing rains fall, sun quietly surrenders. Softer breeze flows as horizon says hello, awaiting hiding sun to peek with a rainbow. Stars roam to brighten the Milky Way soon, moon transforms from gibbous to full moon. Winter pleases revelers with gusting snow, mountain-peaks shine with enchanting glow. Spring paints rising meadows pleasantly green, nature hosts panoramic vistas of lively scenes. College kids flock to beaches on spring break, exploring moments of love, joy, and heartbreak. Celebrating graduations and wedding season, a new chapter on impending life gets written. Joy of summer wraps in rampant humid heat, glimpses of cool breeze intermittently greet. Random changes speak of unpleasant themes, foretelling broken lives and shattered dreams. Earth rotates, sun rises, night accepts defeat, perseverance harbinger of awesome new beat. Winds of hope cheerful new day will bring, singing birds foretell arrival of another spring. September 1, 2017 Placed 1st: Winds of Change Sponsor: Julie Rodeheaver Placed 3rd: Strand choice W contest by Brian Strand

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Date: 9/3/2017 6:58:00 PM
Hi Vijay! Congratulations on your big win with this amazing poem! :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/3/2017 7:19:00 PM
Thank you Susan..lovely feedback!
Date: 9/2/2017 6:45:00 PM
great comparison of life to the seasons, congrats Vijay:-) hugs jan xx
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/2/2017 6:51:00 PM
Lovely comments Jan..I am always happy when you visit.. respect your comments!!
Date: 9/2/2017 3:38:00 PM
Congrats!!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/2/2017 3:46:00 PM
Thank you Karen--and congrats to you as well!
Date: 9/2/2017 12:36:00 PM
Congratulations for your win Vijay :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/2/2017 12:45:00 PM
Thanks Heidi--congrats to you as well!
Date: 9/2/2017 11:49:00 AM
Congrats on your win Vijay
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/2/2017 12:44:00 PM
Thanks Joseph--congrats to you as well!
Date: 9/2/2017 11:21:00 AM
Vijay , congratulation on your win.. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/2/2017 12:44:00 PM
Thank you Eve!
Date: 9/2/2017 4:59:00 AM
I loved your incredible write my friend! I have 2 hrs to use the computer! I'll use them to read and write on Poetry Soup this weekend, then on Monday I have to go back to school and then I'll have to have Emma get back on for me...She is special! Your poem is exquisite and remarkable! I truly enjoyed reading your delightful piece this morning! You have amazed by your incredible skill writing this harmonious poem! You'll do well in the contest! Good Luck! Great Work!!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/2/2017 6:11:00 AM
I have a happy smile reading your comments this morning--I will look forward to reading your poems as you write for the 2 hours. Enjoy the weekend!
Date: 9/1/2017 10:43:00 PM
Hi Vijay, your write is so alive and poetically expressive. Life is all about change and your poem illustrates that in a very beautiful way! I really enjoyed your poem this evening and good luck! :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/2/2017 6:08:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your delightful comments--thank you Susan!
Date: 9/1/2017 8:01:00 PM
Well done, Vijay, welcome summer days again.. good luck in the contest ~`*
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/1/2017 8:15:00 PM
Thank you Eve for your lovely comments!
Date: 9/1/2017 5:15:00 PM
wow, yours is so optimistic and colorful (mine is quite the opposite!) I think Julie is really going to love your entry. I sure did.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/1/2017 5:21:00 PM
Thank you Andrea for reading through this long poem! I really like reading your lovely feedback!
Date: 9/1/2017 4:44:00 PM
I really enjoyed this one Vijay. I am saving it to read again later. Very well done! :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/1/2017 5:11:00 PM
Thank you Heidi for reading through this long poem--appreciate, as always, your lovely comments!
Date: 9/1/2017 3:26:00 PM
Hi Vijay: Everyone changes with each season and this was done beautifully
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/1/2017 3:45:00 PM
Thank you Ralph for your lovely comments!
Date: 9/1/2017 2:30:00 PM
what a wonder to feel the arrival of each cycle through your beautiful write, vijay..huggs
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/1/2017 3:08:00 PM
Thank you nette, for your wonderful feedback!
Date: 9/1/2017 11:51:00 AM
I love the changing of the seasons...it brings a fresh outlook on things...lovely
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/1/2017 12:57:00 PM
Thank you Tim.. lovely comments!
Date: 9/1/2017 10:50:00 AM
Nice! xomo
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/1/2017 10:55:00 AM
So happy to hear from you Maureen. Thanks for your lovely feedback!

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