Suz House Poet Lyric

Winds

A cool wind is making the trees breathe in a slow melodic way
The wind moves the leaves on the ground, making a path for itself

Is the wind trying to get my attention?
Trying to tell me to slow down

I go outside and stand in the open path where the leaves once settled
The feeling is calming, soothing, trance inducing
I let the breeze blow my hair, and caress my arms
The feeling is so wonderful, I smile

It feels as though my heart is warming 
The cool breeze is embracing me 
I am welcoming it with open arms

As the breeze slows to a whisper
I feel myself letting go, allowing calm to enter
I will hold onto this feeling until the cool wind beckons me again

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Mahtab Bangalee January 28, 2019 at 4:38 AM It feels as though my heart is warming// beautiful poem

Joy Spoerndli October 29, 2018 at 1:54 PM I love the feeling of freedom that you invoke with the wind....letting go...so important... JOY

Charlie Smith October 18, 2018 at 11:40 AM Calming, beautiful piece Susan, well done... Suz House October 18, 2018 at 12:08 PM Thank you Charlie.

Caren Krutsinger October 17, 2018 at 2:50 PM I have often sat in a cool wind and tried to write the feeling of it. You have done it for the both of us. Thank you! Suz House October 17, 2018 at 3:58 PM Thank you Caren!

Darlene De Beaulieu October 16, 2018 at 6:06 PM Hello Susan Rigo, so nice to meet you. When i am walking and the strong wind is blowing, it is telling me to walk faster. Have a nice day my friend. I look forward to reading more of your poetry. Suz House October 17, 2018 at 3:58 PM Thank you Darlene. I am so glad you enjoyed it.

Jean Bush October 16, 2018 at 4:11 PM How perfectly lovely. Suz House October 16, 2018 at 4:22 PM Thank you so much.