Windowsill

yellow daffodils,
a bee visits each flower - -
raindrops on the glass

written 4th March for Constance's Nature haiku contest

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Andrea Dietrich

March 11, 2022 at 4:29 PM

how did I miss this one. It's so nice, jack. BIG congrats.

Constance La France

March 8, 2022 at 8:25 AM

Jack, congratulations on your win in my Nature Haiku contest with your wonderful poem ~Constance

Paul Callus

March 7, 2022 at 6:59 AM

That's a lovely image which you paint, Jack. Probably a passing April shower is watering your flowers! Regards // paul

Darlene De Beaulieu

March 5, 2022 at 3:27 PM

Hello Jack, I can picture this scene. Enjoy your evening my friend.

Janice Canerdy

March 5, 2022 at 7:12 AM

Lovely spring scene depicted here, Jack. Janice

Scott Thirtyseven

March 4, 2022 at 6:09 PM

Very nice

Sara Kendrick

March 4, 2022 at 8:42 AM

Ahhh!! I hope the bees got some honey before the rain drove them to a dry spot. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara