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Windows To Another Dimension

They all have similarity in simplicity, My dreams about women – few and far between. I’ve only dreamed about a handful in all my life. Always short – always warm, My head in her lap, My tears in her belly button, Soft kisses on my face in hallways Or houses I’ve never seen Or beaches under golden suns. I know what I want When she visits me in dreams. I always dream these dreams in the early morning, They always grace me unexpectedly, And shake me profoundly. Vividly real – affecting me for days, Always locked away in my memory As if they were events which actually happened. Parallel universes where I am another man, Windows to another dimension Where my heart is full again If only for these brief solitary moments In the phantom worlds of sleep. http://noonehasboundme.com/

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/29/2015 11:21:00 AM
Nice penned........your poem has engross this reader,I thank you for shared this powerful well constructed write. Bless you
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Date: 3/29/2015 12:02:00 PM
Dean, Thank you for the sweet reply on my welcome comment. Love LINDA
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Date: 3/26/2015 1:02:00 AM
You seem to be a very visual person, as your words read like a motion picture in my head...lines like..."My head in her lap, My tears in her belly button,"Original and interesting imagery throughout. "I know what I want When she visits me in dreams.." You also leave the reader thinking...a beautiful composition..dreamy and unique..you've taken me to a different dimension it seems...fascinating! Always, Laura
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Dean Marais
Date: 3/26/2015 11:10:00 AM
hmm i've never really thought about it. maybe its because i was a drawer and painter before i picked up poetry? haha Thanks for reading =)
Date: 3/25/2015 5:36:00 PM
Hi Dean.. powerful, well constructed write, my friend. Poetry Soup is an awesome place to display your creative, artist works. It's also an ideal place to meet and be shaped by other gifted poets. Comment on their works and they will comment on yours. Give one of the Contest a try as well. I look forward to reading more of your good writes and hope you will check me out too, ok!
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Date: 3/18/2015 10:49:00 PM
Hi Dean, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Dean Marais
Date: 3/26/2015 12:21:00 AM
thank you for the welcome
Date: 3/18/2015 10:22:00 PM
Dean, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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Dean Marais
Date: 3/26/2015 12:22:00 AM
thanks for the warm hello