Window View

I look out my window, And what do I see, I see a blue bird looking at me. Why is it looking at me? Does it find me amusing? Do I look confusing? And before I could say anymore, It flew away, I guess it got bored. To My Poet Friend, David :)

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J.W. Earnings

Date: 6/8/2014 9:27:00 PM

Haha this ones silly. Thank you, friend for a well-written poem. It had a little story to it. Is it based on a true, mini story? Cute and clever this write is. -DWB

Ettie Christian-Bowling
Date: 6/15/2014 11:48:00 AM

Actually it did happen to me......it kinda did remind me of you :)lol I'm glad you liked it -Love Ettie

J.W. Earnings
Date: 6/8/2014 9:29:00 PM

Maybe the bird was startled a little? :) Hehe that could be a symbol of me...who knows. Maybe it wanted to be playful or free or just to visit you for a while. xD Have a splendid week, dude.

Jan Allison

Date: 6/6/2014 5:53:00 AM

Love the humour in this write. I have a nesting box opposite my kitchen sadly its not been used this year - I love standing and watching them nest building and then the fledgling finally flying. Hugs Jan x

Ettie Christian-Bowling
Date: 6/7/2014 11:15:00 AM

sounds nice lol thx im glad you like it-Love Ettie