Window To the Future

There was a time
I can attest
A window to the future

Joy was there 
As many others
Happiness came as her tutor

As we jumped 
In and out
Our hearts all a flutter 

What did we find
But the trappings of time
We had landed betwixt each other
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Trifiatis Avatar
October 24, 2013 at 7:39 AM
Deep and thought provoking a good lesson to the young!
Gregory Avatar
October 24, 2013 at 7:51 AM
Good day! Can the morning start any better than with a wonderful comment. Thank you for taking the time....much appreciated! Z
Dietrich Avatar
September 29, 2013 at 4:20 PM
this is so interesting. I really enjoyed it.
Gregory Avatar
September 29, 2013 at 4:51 PM
Thanks so very much for reading!
Gabriella Avatar
June 24, 2013 at 3:46 PM
Great poem! Love "betwixt"!
Gregory Avatar
June 24, 2013 at 3:56 PM
April, thank you so much...I laughed as I re-read it; I get a visual and then laugh again. You're very kind to comment! Z
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