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Window To My Verse

I pen a beauty for a poetry contest, I use the best form that suits my verse, to convey my simple ideas the best; The brilliance of this creation is that it reflects my readers' thoughts; The soul of my poem cares to connect to the readers' mind and intellect. I condense the use of my chosen words, creating a rhythm with cadence with a voice that echoes throughout; They weave magic to create vivid images that adorn the charm of my verse - just like a rainbow enhancing the beauty of sky after a short refreshing summer rain. Now it is time to choose an apt title - It is the first thing that the readers would see, and gives a clue to my poem: matching my content and shaping my readers' perception of poem. Just as eyes are the windows to the soul, my title will be the window to my verse. Date: 05/07/2021 Submitted for: What's In A Title In 14 - 20 Lines Poetry Contest Sponsor: Line Gauthier

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Date: 5/17/2021 11:01:00 PM
Yes, title is important. A poem should also end well, which you have done so well. Congrats for your win
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 5/18/2021 6:45:00 PM
Thank you so much... Aniruddha Pathak
Date: 5/9/2021 11:08:00 AM
It's a revealing work! Congratulations!
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 5/10/2021 6:35:00 AM
Thank you so much Christuraj... God bless.. ~ Ani
Date: 5/9/2021 10:21:00 AM
Anitha Happy Mother's Day Sunday my poet friend. "The brilliance of this creation is that it reflects my readers' thoughts;" Very, very, very...much. -Richard
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 5/10/2021 6:34:00 AM
Thank you so much Richard, both for the comment and the wishes... God bless.. ~ Ani
Date: 5/8/2021 9:03:00 PM
Gosh, this is great, Ani. Bullseye for the contest, and a FAVE for me. Write on! Happiness and Light, gw
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 5/10/2021 6:33:00 AM
Thank you so much Gershon, both for the comment and the fav.. God bless... ~ Ani
Date: 5/8/2021 7:37:00 AM
Your aptly titled poem is what pulled me in:) Humans are naturally curious so a provocative title will always attract more readers. I like your poem, Anitha, especially the ending couplet. Have a Happy Mother's Day young lady:)
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 5/10/2021 6:32:00 AM
Thank you so much Daniel, both for the comment and the wishes... God bless.. ~ Ani
Date: 5/7/2021 11:23:00 PM
Beautiful verse... As you rightly said, title is so important(But I always fail to choose an apt title) I enjoyed reading your verse...
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 5/10/2021 6:31:00 AM
Thank you so much Supraja... Hugs... ~ Ani
Date: 5/7/2021 2:34:00 PM
Dear Anitha, You wrote such a great poem about the importance of a title! "Just as eyes are the windows to the soul, my title will be the window to my verse." - these lines are classic. Love ~ Mala
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 5/10/2021 6:30:00 AM
Thank you so much Mala... Hugs... ~ Ani
Date: 5/7/2021 1:44:00 AM
Great title and beautiful poem. Now tell you a joke. I write a poem thinking it's fabulous but no one comments on it. I write a third rate poem (in my opinion and get loads of views. I give up.
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 5/10/2021 6:30:00 AM
Thank you so much Victor.. God bless.. ~ Ani
Date: 5/6/2021 11:54:00 PM
- Hi dear Ani - Sorry I've been away from the soup for a while ... read my poem: - Thank You For Caring - and you will understand :) - "Window To My Verse" is a wonderful poem .... I feel it is more a window to your soul :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 5/10/2021 6:26:00 AM
Thank you so much dear Anne.. Hugs... ~ Ani