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Windmills of the Mind

Like rain cloud stragglers that co-exist Darker shaded sky, vastly does persist Sunset begins and yellow sets the stage In front, we’re windmills of a fallen age Moving gently through a slight calming breeze Around it goes pumping water with ease Multiple blades dark from a sunset blaze Un-hindered by any slight weathered glaze Just like the windmills of my aging mind I search a memory but seldom find The missing link, the power surge elect It’s my thoughts of which I can’t circumspect In its time, this aquatic synergy Was tooled, but now, I’m out of energy Contest: Grab your Partner Sponsor: POETESS DARKLY 1/30/2014

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Date: 2/5/2014 3:58:00 PM
I agree Linda, RS has a wonderful pen, and a mastery of the language! "Bravo" RS, "Bravo"!//Sinclair
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Date: 2/3/2014 7:17:00 AM
Russell what a command you have on words truly beautiful great pen Shadow x smile hug
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Date: 2/2/2014 10:10:00 AM
awesome write, my friend - hope this is a big winner
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Date: 2/1/2014 5:39:00 PM
Reads like a winner..Way to go Russell and Partner..Thanks for the visit to my p age..Sara
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Date: 2/1/2014 4:13:00 PM
Wow Russell, you've penned a winner here. Absolutely brilliant writing. Anne
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Date: 2/1/2014 1:18:00 PM
Oh Russell....I just told Vie how much I loved this....I really really do....you two did a great job....
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Date: 2/1/2014 11:20:00 AM
you really brought that image of windmills to life by associating bits of nature into the theme...I love your rhyming in this one, russell... again, another astounding work!.. huggs
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Date: 1/31/2014 11:28:00 PM
Great again, gl in the contest Russell. Kayod5.
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