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Windchime Swaying

Orchestrated whimsy
    ~ of crystal delights  



Ziket: a 2-line poem comprised of 5-8 syllables in 1st line, 5 syllables in 2nd line

AP: 2nd place 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Dutta Avatar
August 17, 2020 at 5:58 AM
So perfect. I admire.
Gauthier Avatar
August 17, 2020 at 7:34 PM
Thanks, Anisha. Most appreciated~
Gilmour Avatar
August 13, 2020 at 11:36 PM
a sparkling whimsical write dear Line ~ I love it! With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Gauthier Avatar
August 14, 2020 at 6:59 AM
thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Ann~
Kiser Avatar
August 13, 2020 at 6:23 PM
This is super! Perfect imagery.
Gauthier Avatar
August 13, 2020 at 7:33 PM
Thanks, ML ~
Allison Avatar
August 13, 2020 at 5:57 AM
a real gem so few words say so much:-) hugs jan xx
Gauthier Avatar
August 13, 2020 at 8:19 AM
Thanks, Jan. Much appreciated ~
Somadas Avatar
August 12, 2020 at 10:53 PM
Lovely write Line.. Have a great day..
Gauthier Avatar
August 13, 2020 at 8:18 AM
Thanks, Jenish ~
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 12, 2020 at 3:31 PM
Hello Lin, i love the wind chime it plays music when the wind blows. A peaceful sound for me. Enjoy your evening my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 13, 2020 at 5:55 AM
Hello Lin, you are so welcome. Enjoy your day my friend.
Gauthier Avatar
August 12, 2020 at 10:01 PM
Thank you, Darlene, much appreciated ~
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