Windblown Melodies

A wink
Eyes a sparkling
Dancing upon the wind
Blowing melodies that teases
His lips
To part
Into a smile
His feet begin to jive
To her windblown melodies rythm,
Heartbeat.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Foulk Avatar
May 28, 2011 at 9:51 AM
really enjoy reading your beautiful poetry and your different forms you use, and this one was a joy to read. thank you for commenting on Dear Sister. yes I am going to send her a copy, I tryed calling her, but no answer, will try again, but she was a very dear sister and still is.
Brown Avatar
May 18, 2011 at 10:49 AM
I am spending my morning reading wonderful poetry and enjoying it so much. I am so impressed with the poems I have read so far this morning. I am happy yours was among them Caroline. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors always. Always a pleasure to read your poetry. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
May 18, 2011 at 9:36 AM
a lilting piece of poetry like a song Caroline with uplifting lines... very creative flare u have my friend for this fantastic romantic poetry ..luv..
Mehta Avatar
May 18, 2011 at 5:41 AM
Passionate write with equally passionate images, caroline
Johnson Avatar
May 18, 2011 at 1:52 AM
Great poem methinks... Caroline-Cecile seduction neat... guy caught in a tender trap... flirtation cute the trap a beaut... has fallen in her lap... heartbeat does flutter weak... xo Don
Dietrich Avatar
May 18, 2011 at 12:54 AM
This JIVES. It's so cool, Caroline.
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