Wind Works

wind works first autumn wind gusts picks clean the frolicking branches birds perched ride waves

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Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 2/26/2020 2:44:00 AM

beautiful expression

Joan C. Fingon

Date: 2/25/2020 8:36:00 AM

Nice job, hum is this a haiku with 17 syllables or less? And great image, wind can be powerful in many ways.

Sara Ella

Date: 10/28/2017 1:30:00 PM

PERFECT! Love this and the images you made <3 So TRUE.

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/28/2017 4:30:00 PM

Thank you Sara.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 10/28/2017 7:52:00 AM

Fabulous Haiku dear poetess :) xomo

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/28/2017 11:20:00 AM

So good so far :) have the sweet Bouvier for the weekend, my biggest easiest client, about to head to my favourite park, expansive mixed habitat best for birding replete with a view of the Parliament Buildings and my old office, the core.

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/28/2017 9:11:00 AM

Good morning sister of the pen. How goeth your day so far? Thanks for reading and commenting

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/28/2017 7:40:00 AM

Lovely imagery in your poem, Patricia!

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/28/2017 9:12:00 AM

Thank you Vijay.

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/28/2017 4:11:00 AM

This is a fantastic write my friend! I loved how you wove this and gave an excellent juxtaposition! I really enjoyed reading your illustrious poem here this morning! You have written a masterful poem! What a remarkable piece, Great Work!!

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/28/2017 9:17:00 AM

Good morning Russell thank you for your kind comments.