Wind Works

wind works

first autumn wind gusts
picks clean the frolicking branches
birds perched ride waves
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Bangalee Avatar
February 26, 2020 at 2:44 AM
beautiful expression
Fingon Avatar
February 25, 2020 at 8:36 AM
Nice job, hum is this a haiku with 17 syllables or less? And great image, wind can be powerful in many ways.
Ella Avatar
October 28, 2017 at 1:30 PM
PERFECT! Love this and the images you made <3 So TRUE.
Cresswell Avatar
October 28, 2017 at 4:30 PM
Thank you Sara.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 28, 2017 at 7:52 AM
Fabulous Haiku dear poetess :) xomo
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October 28, 2017 at 11:20 AM
So good so far :) have the sweet Bouvier for the weekend, my biggest easiest client, about to head to my favourite park, expansive mixed habitat best for birding replete with a view of the Parliament Buildings and my old office, the core.
Cresswell Avatar
October 28, 2017 at 9:11 AM
Good morning sister of the pen. How goeth your day so far? Thanks for reading and commenting
Pandit Avatar
October 28, 2017 at 7:40 AM
Lovely imagery in your poem, Patricia!
Cresswell Avatar
October 28, 2017 at 9:12 AM
Thank you Vijay.
Sivey Avatar
October 28, 2017 at 4:11 AM
This is a fantastic write my friend! I loved how you wove this and gave an excellent juxtaposition! I really enjoyed reading your illustrious poem here this morning! You have written a masterful poem! What a remarkable piece, Great Work!!
Cresswell Avatar
October 28, 2017 at 9:17 AM
Good morning Russell thank you for your kind comments.
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