Shadow Hamilton Poet Haiku

Wind Trio

wind sets leaf dancing
waving up and down on twig
pulls and tugs it loose


whipping up water
into colourful bubbles
spraying them afar


scuttling  clouds racing
across the endless blue sky
leaving wisps behind

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Kp Nunez June 28, 2015 at 11:53 AM Lovely. The effect of the wind on the leaf, water and cloud is unarguable! Great imagery. Is this how you expect the entries for your traditional haiku contest, Shadow? Shadow Hamilton July 11, 2015 at 8:37 AM ty Kim and yes but only one haiku hugs

Richard Lamoureux June 25, 2015 at 7:31 AM Last haiku consider "fluffy clouds racing" your first line breaks from the form. I so enjoyed the first two and got a bit stuck on the third. Shadow Hamilton July 11, 2015 at 8:36 AM ty Rick hugs

Andrea Dietrich June 24, 2015 at 11:35 PM this is clever. I especially like the imagery of that first one, shadow. Say, I am on a trip Friday and in case you don't hear back from me in the near future, it's because I can't find internet. Hopefully I will have it though! Shadow Hamilton July 11, 2015 at 8:35 AM ty Andrea hugs

Laura Leiser June 24, 2015 at 5:56 PM Beautiful words and imagery in this wonderful haiku trio, Shadow! 7 Shadow Hamilton July 11, 2015 at 8:35 AM ty Laura hugs

Emile Pinet June 24, 2015 at 5:03 PM Good poems with a wonderful flow of words and ideas. Emile. Shadow Hamilton July 11, 2015 at 8:34 AM ty Emile hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen June 24, 2015 at 1:25 PM - Fascinating .... even in strong winds, Shadow - Love those colorful bubbles :) - A great haiku trio! - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Shadow Hamilton July 11, 2015 at 8:34 AM ty Anne Lise hugs