Wind That Scuttle

It's the wind that scuttle
Had it not left me troubled?
Bewildered and peculiar am I
The strange looks of the sky
Rains by as the day sleeps the night
And welkin seems 
It broke down a frail sigh
Thus, emitted a shrill cry
Shuns the daylight as clouds gather
Entwined with poetic strife
As lovely clouds converge to safeguard
I have thought...
When the wind come hitherto from afar
Only shall it present
...more mellow mars
Suddenly fallen have I
...the prolific wind scuttles
It's the wind that scuttle
Had it, left me yet troubled?
Bewildered and peculiar am I...
Nevertheless...
Eyes of tomorrow shall come to pass
And mind of sorrow fall short at last
I want to make much...of my soul
However...the wind which tarry hitherto stows me much troubles
In which I composed a frail sigh from
And even I...I emit a shrill cry, with a voice, saying...
"Goodbye. That I may change direction from mellow mars."
And now...brother and sisters. Behold...now I am free.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 11/25/2011 7:28:00 PM
There is a lot of depth in this poem, leaving the reader with something to ponder. Wishing you the best with your writing. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen
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Date: 8/11/2009 2:13:00 PM
Very thoughtful and provacative! Light & Love and welcome to the Soup!
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Davin Math
Date: 11/24/2011 12:24:00 AM
Thank you so much, and sorry for the late response.
Date: 8/11/2009 11:31:00 AM
Good afternoon Davin. I just finished entering some of the contests going on here at the Soup. Now I am going to read some of the poems written here. Thank you for sharing yours. Look through the contests maybe you might want to enter some of them also if you haven't already. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/24/2011 12:25:00 AM
Thanks Carol, I will definitely look into some, please forgive me for being late on this reply.
Date: 8/11/2009 4:45:00 AM
Interesting. Sara
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Date: 11/24/2011 12:23:00 AM
Thank you, haha, sorry for the very late response.
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