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Wind Swept

Wind swept on the moor
I stood; my soul far away
Flowing with the clouds

Date: 7.8.2014

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Scott Thirtyseven

November 22, 2014 at 5:44 PM

Now tweeting the top 3. May my meagre influence on twitter win you many more reads.

John Lawless

November 16, 2014 at 5:19 PM

It has been said that "Brevity is the soul of wit" and here you have mastered it.

Hija De La Luna

November 10, 2014 at 3:08 AM

yes, i could visualize this imagery and relate how the soul go flowing with the clouds. love this! Congratulations, Mohan!

Maurice Yvonne

November 9, 2014 at 7:20 PM

Kool Ku! Congratulations on your top of the list win.

Mark Trichet

November 9, 2014 at 4:41 PM

Well done Mohan, congratulations.

Jan Allison

November 9, 2014 at 4:05 PM

beautifully penned many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Scott Thirtyseven

November 7, 2014 at 11:09 PM

I've finally judged the "Solitude" poetry competition. Now while I wait for Soup to post the winners, so that I can announce them in a Blog, I'm catching up and letting some poets know how they went. This haiku took me to the heavens. I found in this piece the enormity that had inspired the competition. So I'd like to take this opportunity to tell you that "Wind Swept", swept into second position. Well done.

Mohan Chutani

November 8, 2014 at 12:50 AM

Scott, thanks for the long awaited results, my placement in your contest, liking it so much, and your kind words. Mohan