Wind Song

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Wailing wind soft hard and loose
Indigo sins blown away by you
Not everyone listens to your truth
Denim days are made forever blue

Soulful song sounds silvery sonnet
Onyx town with a curse on it
Neon prayers clash with Easter bonnet
Graveyard laugh as heart is haunted

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Jacqueline R. Mendoza

Date: 6/5/2025 9:41:00 PM

Thank u for giving me a Rhyming vocabs. I don't know how I can respond to what u said, do I press reply under my name?

Karen Jones
Date: 6/10/2025 5:54:00 PM

Yes

Jacqueline R. Mendoza
Date: 6/5/2025 10:44:00 PM

Like this?

Karen Jones
Date: 6/5/2025 10:42:00 PM

Yes press reply and then write your comment. :0)