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Wind Rider

*****This poem was fairly popular, though I'm re-posting it for the ladies**** **From my collection of poems: 'Apollo's Diary' I wonder if she thinks of me, at night, alone..... in her melting-bed; With moon full as her curiousity ....my breath, the wind in the late hour the stars I shall tease with, and phallic-lavender to ignite her bosom; I am all things gentle, yet mighty, soft as her silk sheets..... Dark and tall in her bedroom shadows, but candle-light makes me real with the night so young, if a king should come ---- he will not do..... She longs love, not adulterous power; I shall whisper upon a balmy breeze..... (I wonder if she thinks of me) at night.....

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Date: 2/9/2020 4:19:00 PM
I think my idea of the perfect man would be one who is "gentle, yet mighty," Keith. At night when she longs for love, I feel certain she is thinking of you. You are such an amazing writer. Another addition to my faves! Hugs, Carolyn
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 2/11/2020 2:38:00 PM
Thanks Carolyn; like I've told others --- you are one of the people who reminds when I doubt myself that my writes are worth the effort;-)
Date: 2/5/2020 2:20:00 PM
excellent write - no wonder it's so popular
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 2/11/2020 2:36:00 PM
Thanks Jack for gracing my poem with your visit;-)
Date: 2/4/2020 1:42:00 PM
I can see why this one would be popular. Great imagery my friend.
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 2/11/2020 2:36:00 PM
Thanks Richard, glad to hear from you again;-)
Date: 2/2/2020 1:11:00 PM
I'm sure she thinks of you...how could she resist your romantic words...
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 2/11/2020 2:35:00 PM
;-)
Date: 2/1/2020 5:31:00 AM
My friend very few can write romantic verses at the level that you do. Another jewel and another fav.. Great to see you posting again....
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 2/11/2020 2:35:00 PM
Many thanks brother, and Carolyn and her kind words of encouragement;-)
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 2/9/2020 4:19:00 PM
So true! Keith has a way with romantic verse!
Date: 1/31/2020 3:54:00 PM
This was beautifully done Keith. I really enjoyed this romantic passionate piece of writing
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 2/9/2020 4:20:00 PM
You and Keith are both romantic writers I admire, Chris. I'm glad to see Keith more active here now and his work getting more exposure.
Date: 1/31/2020 3:27:00 PM
Truly a romantic gem Keith--verses that evoke passion!
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