Ann Gilmour Poet Rhyme

Wind Inopportune

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wind so strong ~~~
all night long  ~~~

                            

                            what damage |||
                                   seen at dawn ||||



                                                           /// flower pots \\\
                                                            /// scattered \\\
                                                             /// all around \\\


                             <>broken plants<>                                                 
                     ## petals  ##  strewn ##


                                                           too soon ~~~~
                                                                ‘tis early June ~~~~

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                                                  by a   ~~~
                                                      wind   ~~~
                                         ~~~ inopportune ~~~


A BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE no 1228' 
Sponsor	Brian Strand
2nd PLACE

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Anne-Lise Andresen July 11, 2023 at 11:41 AM - Ann, congratulations on your creative poem :) - hugs Ann Gilmour July 11, 2023 at 1:54 PM Thank you so much Anne-Lise for your kind words and I must say I was thrilled to make 2nd place in Brian's Premiere Contest... With kindest thoughts Ann xx

David Fisher July 3, 2023 at 4:32 PM Wow, what a poetic layout, and enjoyed the story to boot! Ann Gilmour July 5, 2023 at 10:49 PM Hello David, many thanks for your encouraging words and so glad you enjoyed my poem... kindest regards Ann x