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Wind Inopportune

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ wind so strong ~~~ all night long ~~~ what damage ||| seen at dawn |||| /// flower pots \\\ /// scattered \\\ /// all around \\\ <>broken plants<> ## petals ## strewn ## too soon ~~~~ ‘tis early June ~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ by a ~~~ wind ~~~ ~~~ inopportune ~~~ A BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE no 1228' Sponsor Brian Strand 2nd PLACE

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Date: 7/11/2023 11:41:00 AM
- Ann, congratulations on your creative poem :) - hugs
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 7/11/2023 1:54:00 PM
Thank you so much Anne-Lise for your kind words and I must say I was thrilled to make 2nd place in Brian's Premiere Contest... With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 7/3/2023 4:32:00 PM
Wow, what a poetic layout, and enjoyed the story to boot!
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 7/5/2023 10:49:00 PM
Hello David, many thanks for your encouraging words and so glad you enjoyed my poem... kindest regards Ann x

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