wind hiku

cumulus lambs

                        a  m  b  l  e  through  heaven’s blue . . .

 wind's sudden h  o  w  l
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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A  Avatar
May 16, 2015 at 11:46 AM
stunning
Chakrabarty Avatar
December 11, 2014 at 9:12 AM
Hmmm cumulus..an autumn lamb...love..rajat
Babcock Avatar
October 23, 2014 at 4:59 PM
Nice one Andrea. Want to finish this month off today. love phyl
Gibson Avatar
August 27, 2014 at 8:36 PM
Love this one, Andrea; very nice haiku which deserves a higher slot. Congrats.
A. Sharma Avatar
August 26, 2014 at 11:29 AM
Great imagery Andrea n a huge win! Congrats on ur awesome winning write!
Mandani Avatar
August 26, 2014 at 10:56 AM
Very imaginative. Wonder what's it doing grazing down at the 4th place?
Dietrich Avatar
August 26, 2014 at 6:30 PM
hey thanks, I appreciate that!
Mehta Avatar
August 25, 2014 at 5:09 AM
Pleasing scene aptly created with images, Andrea. congrats .
Nance Avatar
August 24, 2014 at 8:21 PM
Back again to grats your winner andrea great one :)
Allison Avatar
August 24, 2014 at 6:49 PM
Incredible imagery of the lamb grazing - not sure I can eat the little spring lambs ever again after reading this! Great win Hugs jan x
Sietesantos Avatar
August 24, 2014 at 4:32 PM
Andrea, please accept my huge congratulations for walking away with this wonderful win in the contest! Excellent write, my friend! Well-deserved! Pandita
A   Avatar
August 24, 2014 at 3:37 PM
Andrea, LOL, I love every line, I guess, I'd be afraid if I were the lamb. Congratulations, thank you for supporting my contest "IN THE CLOUDS!" Take care and enjoy my blog, "Pillow Fights" If you like or have the time. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Comporozos Avatar
August 12, 2014 at 6:20 AM
Wow, a real haiku!!
Mohn Avatar
August 5, 2014 at 8:53 PM
Love the picture of the stalker and the stalked, so far above...this should do well
Horsman Avatar
August 5, 2014 at 4:39 AM
oh yes i read this and see the picture, yet then another and another, roll off the imagination, this is indeed clever poetry...
Sirak Avatar
August 3, 2014 at 7:31 AM
Beautiful! You have expressed so much in so few lines. I love watching clouds as they continually change.
Mister Roboto Avatar
August 1, 2014 at 2:04 PM
Super genius pen on clouds. Cumulus, one of my favorite types. mY mom used to call me the Grazing Lamb and dinner time. My Last name had people of all sorts making Lamb noises at me back in school. San AndreaS, I am fortunate to have you reading my poems and to be able to hear yours. Please do keep corresponding with me on our journey through creativity....Thank you sooo much
Gasun Avatar
August 1, 2014 at 7:37 AM
A brilliant write my dearest friend Andrea. I love the very beautiful image of cumulus lamb grazing in heaven's blue. I'm sure our dearest friend PD will love this as much as I do. Thank u so much. Good luck and God bless! love lots and biggest hugs, Leonora
Austin Avatar
July 31, 2014 at 11:09 AM
Nice picture. I can see the lamb clearly. Love, daver
Smith Avatar
July 31, 2014 at 9:25 AM
BAM!!!.... Omg! I love this, Andrea!.. Hugs.. And gl in the contest!.. Arlene
Nehls Avatar
July 30, 2014 at 2:01 AM
Very creative, Andrea. Good thin there is a great shepherd in heavens blue to protect that lamb. I enjoyed this one, my friend.... Robert.
Smith Avatar
July 29, 2014 at 11:50 PM
Wow...the lamb from heaven....hugs Tim
Anish Avatar
July 29, 2014 at 11:01 PM
Nice images in this short work! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Lawless Avatar
July 29, 2014 at 10:44 PM
I like it. a vivid picture with a grey wolf howling.....
A. Sharma Avatar
July 29, 2014 at 10:24 PM
This really is awesome Andrea! good luck in contest dear!
Sivey Avatar
July 29, 2014 at 9:24 PM
Yes! You are still writing tremendous poems here just like this masterpiece here my friend! I have missed you all, what a grandiose write Andrea, Great Work!!
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