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Wind Has Wounded Hearts

The Wind was once a friend to me, Silent and calm as it should be... Now it seems like an enemy, Pounding, whooshing and scaring me... Can't it see what it's doing to me and my family? Making us as homeless as we could be... How will I ever forgive thee? For taking away my family's peace... It has given no sympathy, Nor an apology. How do I know it won't ever come back? Come back and attack... The way it was born to be... The Wind was once a friend to me, Silent and calm as it should be... To all the victims of cyclone Yasi

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/5/2016 2:10:00 PM

Taylor,, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Always with LUV ** LINDA **

Taylor Krause

Date: 12/7/2011 10:58:00 PM

Thankyou all for your support very much appreciated! This will not be the last you hear from Taylor Krause :D

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 12/6/2011 2:05:00 AM

Wow! This is a masterpiece, I love the flow of words mixed with emotions in this piece. You are a poet with a great mind. I hope the wind wont come back to attack but to be a friend, mild and meek. Welcome to the Soup friend! Enjoy the love, light and liftings it offers you. Adeleke.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/5/2011 5:36:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Taylor. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

Lizzie Treetop

Date: 12/5/2011 1:25:00 AM

I am so sorry you suffered at the hands of such a terrible disaster! Tayor I would like as a fellow Aiustralian to welcome you to Poetry Soup, you will find it a place of great friendship and uplifting friends. You will go Bonkers trying to chose which incredible poetry to read, but yu will eventually discover the one that appeal to you. I go crazy every day with it all and have only been here a month. Once again welcome if you need any help just Soup Mail me. God Bless you and your family Lizzie T

Craig Schaber

Date: 12/4/2011 11:03:00 AM

welcome to poetry soup nice poem hope to read more.

Jessica Bateman

Date: 12/3/2011 11:53:00 PM

a good write. hope to see more from you soon. ~Jessi