Wind Chime Soul

The child within us weeps at marble headstones 
pallid wilting flowers dark plume wreaths scatter 
harpsichord of heartbeats waltz on grey day plot  
wind chime soul petals float past afterlife clouds.



Contest : A BRIAN STRAND SHORTIE

Sponsor : Brian Strand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Kendrick Avatar
April 20, 2026 at 5:02 AM
Belated congrats on your winning work in Brian's contest. Yes, going to the cemetery can be cathartic. Visiting my parents' graves hasn't been as hard in the few years, it has been 28 years since my father's death and 26 years since my mother's death. I won't live long enough for that number of years to pass when visiting my husband's grave. Sara K
Radice Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 3:40 AM
Line, in her comments from July 2020 below, echo mine today: "Deep and touching" I tend to overuse the word poignant when describing work but your four lines, for me, are that too. Congratulations on the win in Brian's contest. Cheers - Gary
La France Avatar
July 29, 2020 at 5:31 PM
Howard, congratulations on your win in my 4 line contest _Constance
Kerr Avatar
July 29, 2020 at 6:11 PM
Hello Constance, I value the win and selection in your contest. Thanks for the time involved in reading and evaluating my work and of course the decision. Howard
Dietrich Avatar
July 29, 2020 at 1:48 PM
Beautiful lines, Howard!
Kerr Avatar
July 29, 2020 at 2:50 PM
Hi Andrea, Thanks for soup mail. I appreciate your comment Howard
Gauthier Avatar
July 28, 2020 at 6:11 PM
Deep and touching, Howard. Lovely~
Kerr Avatar
July 28, 2020 at 9:28 PM
Hi Line, I’m deeply touched by your comment. Thanks for reading my work Howard
Mishra Avatar
July 28, 2020 at 1:39 PM
This is such a beautiful one Howard. It feels like a melody. Congratulations on your win!
Kerr Avatar
July 28, 2020 at 2:20 PM
Hi Aditi I value your reflections on my entries. Thank you so very much indeed Howard
Andresen Avatar
July 28, 2020 at 2:44 AM
- Four beautiful lines ... congratulations on your win, Howard :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kerr Avatar
July 28, 2020 at 3:01 AM
Thanks for your prompt soup mail and of course your compliment. Congratulations to you Anne-Lise for your flawless winning entry. Warmth Howard
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