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Wind Chime Soul

The child within us weeps at marble headstones pallid wilting flowers dark plume wreaths scatter harpsichord of heartbeats waltz on grey day plot wind chime soul petals float past afterlife clouds. Contest : A BRIAN STRAND SHORTIE Sponsor : Brian Strand

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Gary Radice

Date: 1/3/2021 3:40:00 AM

Line, in her comments from July 2020 below, echo mine today: "Deep and touching" I tend to overuse the word poignant when describing work but your four lines, for me, are that too. Congratulations on the win in Brian's contest. Cheers - Gary

Constance La France

Date: 7/29/2020 5:31:00 PM

Howard, congratulations on your win in my 4 line contest _Constance

Howard Kerr
Date: 7/29/2020 6:11:00 PM

Hello Constance, I value the win and selection in your contest. Thanks for the time involved in reading and evaluating my work and of course the decision. Howard

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/29/2020 1:48:00 PM

Beautiful lines, Howard!

Howard Kerr
Date: 7/29/2020 2:50:00 PM

Hi Andrea, Thanks for soup mail. I appreciate your comment Howard

Line Gauthier

Date: 7/28/2020 6:11:00 PM

Deep and touching, Howard. Lovely~

Howard Kerr
Date: 7/28/2020 9:28:00 PM

Hi Line, I’m deeply touched by your comment. Thanks for reading my work Howard

Aditi Mishra

Date: 7/28/2020 1:39:00 PM

This is such a beautiful one Howard. It feels like a melody. Congratulations on your win!

Howard Kerr
Date: 7/28/2020 2:20:00 PM

Hi Aditi I value your reflections on my entries. Thank you so very much indeed Howard

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/28/2020 2:44:00 AM

- Four beautiful lines ... congratulations on your win, Howard :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Howard Kerr
Date: 7/28/2020 3:01:00 AM

Thanks for your prompt soup mail and of course your compliment. Congratulations to you Anne-Lise for your flawless winning entry. Warmth Howard