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Wind



wind is a gaseous, gusty ghost that gyrates, gallops gallantly



December 30, 2017

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Paul Callus

January 1, 2018 at 4:41 PM

A lovely expressive monoku supported by great alliteration. ~ Hope the new year will bring you happiness and inspiration. Regards // paul

Susan Ashley

December 30, 2017 at 7:31 PM

Great use of alliteration in your lovely and creative depiction of blowing wind, Sandra. Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan

Agnes Krampe

December 30, 2017 at 5:29 PM

Love your alliteration, and the picture is stunning.

Connie Marcum Wong

December 30, 2017 at 4:45 PM

The wind has a personality for me though invisible she makes her presence known. Look out when she gets angry! I enjoyed your Monoku Sandra. I wish y ou a very Happy New Year! : ) xxoo