Wind

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wind is a gaseous, gusty ghost that gyrates, gallops gallantly December 30, 2017 Contest: Monoku 3: fire, earth, water, and air (choose one) Sponsor: Silent One 17 Syllables

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Paul Callus

Date: 1/1/2018 4:41:00 PM

A lovely expressive monoku supported by great alliteration. ~ Hope the new year will bring you happiness and inspiration. Regards // paul

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/30/2017 7:31:00 PM

Great use of alliteration in your lovely and creative depiction of blowing wind, Sandra. Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan

Agnes Krampe

Date: 12/30/2017 5:29:00 PM

Love your alliteration, and the picture is stunning.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/30/2017 4:45:00 PM

The wind has a personality for me though invisible she makes her presence known. Look out when she gets angry! I enjoyed your Monoku Sandra. I wish y ou a very Happy New Year! : ) xxoo

Janice Canerdy

Date: 12/30/2017 11:13:00 AM

Very creative, Sandra! Janice