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wind strips oak's brown leaves sun reveals bare limbs' shadows... currents lift buzzards
I looked outside and the bare limbs' shadows were upon the ground then I saw what I thought was buzzards' circling shadows on the same ground then I said no that had to be the few leaves left being moved by the wind but no then the buzzards circled again..I quickly closed the door..I am so old they might be circling me..LOL

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/29/2015 3:56:00 PM
Excellent Haiku with the nature, the color contrast, sun and shadow. Very nice.
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Date: 12/22/2015 3:33:00 PM
Excellent poem and loved your imagery my lovely friend. Loved always,bl
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Date: 11/29/2015 6:21:00 PM
LOL, Sara, I love this. The imagery is amazing, yet the buzzards circling made me giggle. Love LINDA
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Date: 11/25/2015 2:39:00 PM
Cool!
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